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Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a fabulous work to meet this contest guidelines. Loved your creativeness in this one. Strong descriptive expressions that hold the reader captive.
I really liked this one. It gives me a good read and yet its thought provoking too...left me pondering it even as I write this review. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
This is a fabulous work to meet this contest guidelines. Loved your creativeness in this one. Strong descriptive expressions that hold the reader captive.
I really liked this one. It gives me a good read and yet its thought provoking too...left me pondering it even as I write this review. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Maureen - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from cinderbella
I found this to be very clever and very creative. I love the analogies. My favorite lines are "I shall spin with little pity, a spider's web to catch the ones I hate" I loved it.
The rhyme is perfect, and the rhythm is flawless. :) Sandra
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
I found this to be very clever and very creative. I love the analogies. My favorite lines are "I shall spin with little pity, a spider's web to catch the ones I hate" I loved it.
The rhyme is perfect, and the rhythm is flawless. :) Sandra
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Sandra.
I am sure Conan Doyle set out to make them as evenly matched as possible and really Holmes was far from likeable, even if he was on the right side of the law.
Comment from Jose Saic
Excellent poem that decribes the mind of great detectives or criminals in real or fiction histrories.
But in this case, the author selected both characters of the english writer Sir Arthur Conan Doyle: Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty.
I think that the english writer would be satisfied and pleasure reading this verses.
I like it.
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
Excellent poem that decribes the mind of great detectives or criminals in real or fiction histrories.
But in this case, the author selected both characters of the english writer Sir Arthur Conan Doyle: Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty.
I think that the english writer would be satisfied and pleasure reading this verses.
I like it.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Gracias, Jose!
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Por nada amigo
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this excellent verse about the infamous sherlock holmes. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this excellent verse about the infamous sherlock holmes. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you!