You Are Being Watched
Happy living Protect and keep safe 202 words A Non-Fiction122 total reviews
Comment from trailblazer101
It is an excellent write. At times tying the long lists with commas takes a second read and some thought, but it all makes sense and it is deep so a second read is not out of the question anyway.
Some things might be rephrased for clarity but I sense you have your own style and readers will adapt because of the message.
Don't neglect anybody or anything. 'Think what may happen, if you keep your gold jewelry lying on the road.'
I would have inserted an 'about' after 'Think' and for more clarity but what is there is fine.
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It is an excellent write. At times tying the long lists with commas takes a second read and some thought, but it all makes sense and it is deep so a second read is not out of the question anyway.
Some things might be rephrased for clarity but I sense you have your own style and readers will adapt because of the message.
Don't neglect anybody or anything. 'Think what may happen, if you keep your gold jewelry lying on the road.'
I would have inserted an 'about' after 'Think' and for more clarity but what is there is fine.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Robbie Yates
This is a very nice no-nonsense text that reminds us all that we need to be cautious, but not paranoid. Well done. I particularly liked the line, "Be wise. Dreams or notices will not hint or warn you in advance."
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This is a very nice no-nonsense text that reminds us all that we need to be cautious, but not paranoid. Well done. I particularly liked the line, "Be wise. Dreams or notices will not hint or warn you in advance."
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from meeshu
excellent effort here, ALCREATOR. an interesting take I must say. you know Isaiah warned us that God would send the watchers to earth before the last days. maybe he was right...........meeshu
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excellent effort here, ALCREATOR. an interesting take I must say. you know Isaiah warned us that God would send the watchers to earth before the last days. maybe he was right...........meeshu
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Aussie
Jesus said. "Don't store your things on earth where rust and moth doth corrupt, rather store your precious things in heaven above." We live in a world of theft and greed. All that glitters isn't gold. Take what you need and He will supply the rest. Blessings, Kay.
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Jesus said. "Don't store your things on earth where rust and moth doth corrupt, rather store your precious things in heaven above." We live in a world of theft and greed. All that glitters isn't gold. Take what you need and He will supply the rest. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from JDRBAR
Wise words Al. It's hard to know how far to go to protect oneself and property without getting paranoid. Myself, I refuse to be a prisoner in my own home. I like open windows at night. Helps me sleep better. Friends think I'm being too risky.
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Wise words Al. It's hard to know how far to go to protect oneself and property without getting paranoid. Myself, I refuse to be a prisoner in my own home. I like open windows at night. Helps me sleep better. Friends think I'm being too risky.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from jusylee72
This has a strong, personal point of view. I do treasure life and needed to remember to hold everyone close. All thoughts and words either help the world or lead to destruction. Thank you for the reminder.
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This has a strong, personal point of view. I do treasure life and needed to remember to hold everyone close. All thoughts and words either help the world or lead to destruction. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from closetpoetjester
I agree, nothing is fullproof and life is for living...not existing in the past or a planning an unrealistic future.
You send a strong message of faith and to be wise when feelings of mistrust rise without warning.
I do agree.
NEVER toss your jewellery anywhere NEAR the road LOL
Preferably not under a bus either haha
I enjoy your take on life and everything in it.
P
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I agree, nothing is fullproof and life is for living...not existing in the past or a planning an unrealistic future.
You send a strong message of faith and to be wise when feelings of mistrust rise without warning.
I do agree.
NEVER toss your jewellery anywhere NEAR the road LOL
Preferably not under a bus either haha
I enjoy your take on life and everything in it.
P
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Our world has gone crazy. What with global warming, and criminal activities, all on the rise, we have to begin to take better care in all we do. We not only have to protect our lives, and that of our family, we have to take care of the world as a whole, all need to be protected and cared for, Well done, A, another excellent write. :) Sandra xx
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Our world has gone crazy. What with global warming, and criminal activities, all on the rise, we have to begin to take better care in all we do. We not only have to protect our lives, and that of our family, we have to take care of the world as a whole, all need to be protected and cared for, Well done, A, another excellent write. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from royowen
It doesn't really matter what others do, that's up to them an God, for surely alll things come before Him eventually, it shouldn't affect us one little bit. If somebody says something bad, so what, it's not an AK 47 pointed at you. Well done, great article, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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It doesn't really matter what others do, that's up to them an God, for surely alll things come before Him eventually, it shouldn't affect us one little bit. If somebody says something bad, so what, it's not an AK 47 pointed at you. Well done, great article, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
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Most welckme
Comment from Raul1
I like the story. It is important to keep in mind of all the safety advices we need to take. This non-fiction story is worth reading. It covers all the safety measures. We have to look out for ourselves. Nice story.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I like the story. It is important to keep in mind of all the safety advices we need to take. This non-fiction story is worth reading. It covers all the safety measures. We have to look out for ourselves. Nice story.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
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You're welcome
