Singing for Heavenly Boarding
Suffering is Singing for a Heavenly Boarding -- Alliterative114 total reviews
Comment from JM daSilva
I guess singing for heavenly boarding means singing to go to heaven. I can't say I understood all of it, but I got some parts your poem and I agree with some of the messages.
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I guess singing for heavenly boarding means singing to go to heaven. I can't say I understood all of it, but I got some parts your poem and I agree with some of the messages.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
Comment from Mastery
Hello alcreator. You have a wonderfully emotionally charged poem here. I noted these lines in particular:
" this earthly living all that He offered you for a living
N othing owes to anyone but to Him for an offer of everything
I n a land beyond any mark, sign, symbol, mass, volume"
Bravo! Bob
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Hello alcreator. You have a wonderfully emotionally charged poem here. I noted these lines in particular:
" this earthly living all that He offered you for a living
N othing owes to anyone but to Him for an offer of everything
I n a land beyond any mark, sign, symbol, mass, volume"
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from Earth Serpent
Wow, that is the longest poem I have ever read, and the first of its type. I enjoy the duality of its base message. To suffer is to truly love and live. Life is not for conformity, or taking heed when one tells us no, or it is dangerous, it is for living, and truth and love are worth suffering the fight to have. Great work, keep it up
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Wow, that is the longest poem I have ever read, and the first of its type. I enjoy the duality of its base message. To suffer is to truly love and live. Life is not for conformity, or taking heed when one tells us no, or it is dangerous, it is for living, and truth and love are worth suffering the fight to have. Great work, keep it up
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from AudreyRose
Beautiful, great job with the first letters making the words. The rhythm was nice and the imagery was wonderful. I could feel the emotion behind it. All in all a good job.
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Beautiful, great job with the first letters making the words. The rhythm was nice and the imagery was wonderful. I could feel the emotion behind it. All in all a good job.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
this is a confusing piece to read and overlong. to be honest, i haven't even a clue as to the acrostic - makes no sense to me at all.
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this is a confusing piece to read and overlong. to be honest, i haven't even a clue as to the acrostic - makes no sense to me at all.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from Jean Lutz
Why did you not enter this is the acrostic poem contest? It is a challenging piece that gives one lots to think about. Psalm 119 is actually a Hebrew acrostic.
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Why did you not enter this is the acrostic poem contest? It is a challenging piece that gives one lots to think about. Psalm 119 is actually a Hebrew acrostic.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from lakeport
Singing for heavenly boarding, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.lakeport,
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Singing for heavenly boarding, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.lakeport,
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from Heidixoxo
This most definitely earned my full 6 stars!! This was an amazing poem, so well put together and flowed nicely til the end. Great creativity and word choice. Thank you for sharing with us all and best of luck to you....xoxo
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This most definitely earned my full 6 stars!! This was an amazing poem, so well put together and flowed nicely til the end. Great creativity and word choice. Thank you for sharing with us all and best of luck to you....xoxo
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from Janet Foor
Suffering is Singing for a Heavenly Boarding -- Great alliteration throughout. Good rhyme and internal rhyming. A good poem of faith and hope.
Blessings
Janet
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Suffering is Singing for a Heavenly Boarding -- Great alliteration throughout. Good rhyme and internal rhyming. A good poem of faith and hope.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
Comment from david bell
No wonder this won awards. You have managed to give us a recipe for our lives and how we should approach it deserves more than my meager praise.
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No wonder this won awards. You have managed to give us a recipe for our lives and how we should approach it deserves more than my meager praise.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
