What We Pass By
sonnet164 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
Lovely thought of profound simplicity in this Shakespearean Sonnet that is upbeat and delightful to read, as well as teaching poetically about true unfathomed beauty. Very nicely done. A joy to read. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Lovely thought of profound simplicity in this Shakespearean Sonnet that is upbeat and delightful to read, as well as teaching poetically about true unfathomed beauty. Very nicely done. A joy to read. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Treischel, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
How beautiful Brooke, Sawyer is adorable and so is your thoughtful poem. It makes one think everything in this world has a purpose. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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How beautiful Brooke, Sawyer is adorable and so is your thoughtful poem. It makes one think everything in this world has a purpose. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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Gaye, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
This is so true. For most anyway. I was always drawn to the sand. I wondered how the ocean and the sand knew where meet. Maybe that's because I live far away from the beach lol.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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This is so true. For most anyway. I was always drawn to the sand. I wondered how the ocean and the sand knew where meet. Maybe that's because I live far away from the beach lol.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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kra-z-ka-z, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
How can you go wrong with a pic of a baby. Loved the baby pic. Below was a favorite line; don't know why, it just fit.
[this minor part was cast instead of skipped.]
Didn't quite understand line below; but it didn't take away from this great poem.
[they are the stage without which there's no plot.]
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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How can you go wrong with a pic of a baby. Loved the baby pic. Below was a favorite line; don't know why, it just fit.
[this minor part was cast instead of skipped.]
Didn't quite understand line below; but it didn't take away from this great poem.
[they are the stage without which there's no plot.]
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much, amahra - he is so darned cute that he just keeps inspiring new poems :-) Brooke
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. I love the message that it has- so often we ignore the "little things" that make everything possible.
Barbara
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. I love the message that it has- so often we ignore the "little things" that make everything possible.
Barbara
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from expressions9
This is a lovely poem Brooke reminding us of how important it is to appreciate what even seems most insignificant that makes up our lives. As always, your sonnet is written perfectly and has a nice flow! (At least Sawyer appreciates the sand!!)
Thanks for sharing :)
Christine
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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This is a lovely poem Brooke reminding us of how important it is to appreciate what even seems most insignificant that makes up our lives. As always, your sonnet is written perfectly and has a nice flow! (At least Sawyer appreciates the sand!!)
Thanks for sharing :)
Christine
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Christine, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome :)
Christine
Comment from Stephanie Kay
Wow! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was easy to read and follow and the message is clear. There is nothing insignificant in this world, but unfortunately, we are so often focused on the 'bigger and better' that we fail to take note of the foundations without which the 'bigger and better' could not have been built.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Wow! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was easy to read and follow and the message is clear. There is nothing insignificant in this world, but unfortunately, we are so often focused on the 'bigger and better' that we fail to take note of the foundations without which the 'bigger and better' could not have been built.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Stephanie, thank yu so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from seren james
I wonder what goes through the head of a child when he examines natures wonder.
You have included this picture which enhances your poem. The words are a meditation to realise the importance of seemingly insignificant things.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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I wonder what goes through the head of a child when he examines natures wonder.
You have included this picture which enhances your poem. The words are a meditation to realise the importance of seemingly insignificant things.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Seren, thank you so much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from gazzagodbod
what pictures you paint with your wonderful words Adewpearl my friend and your grandson is gorgeous looks like a writer to me thanks xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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what pictures you paint with your wonderful words Adewpearl my friend and your grandson is gorgeous looks like a writer to me thanks xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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gazza, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Brooke,
I'm always fascinated how you can take an everything thing and turn it into the sublime poetry you do. yes...the sand, only appriciated in the aggrigate, but you've seen it in another light. Beautiful job--Ted
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Dear Brooke,
I'm always fascinated how you can take an everything thing and turn it into the sublime poetry you do. yes...the sand, only appriciated in the aggrigate, but you've seen it in another light. Beautiful job--Ted
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Ted, thanks so very much, my friend - I truly appreciate your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
