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Comment from Earl of Oxford
I can't understand why you have 'uneven flow intentionally'.
Why not include consistent meter in rhyme/structured poetry for a smoother read?
Much of this excellent poem IS a smooth read, though IMO it could be improved.
Terrific and caring personification of the abused trees and Man's greed. I sometimes wonder if trees feel pain.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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I can't understand why you have 'uneven flow intentionally'.
Why not include consistent meter in rhyme/structured poetry for a smoother read?
Much of this excellent poem IS a smooth read, though IMO it could be improved.
Terrific and caring personification of the abused trees and Man's greed. I sometimes wonder if trees feel pain.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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I know your concern, but I wanted to give it an odd alien mood. Thanks for your review.
