Cutters
a poem about different types of cutting20 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
"Others cut with blades
I cut myself with music
filled with memories"
i agree, there's nothing better to be hearing oldies to lighten up the day.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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"Others cut with blades
I cut myself with music
filled with memories"
i agree, there's nothing better to be hearing oldies to lighten up the day.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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thank you, but I fear it is darker than that. The music cuts deep by freshening memories of loves, friends, and chances long lost.
Comment from Tina McKala
After reading your second poem I couldn`t help myself but read more of your stuff, I`m glad I came to this one. It is just as powerful as the other one, special approach and unique style of building up this kind of a poem. Bravo!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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After reading your second poem I couldn`t help myself but read more of your stuff, I`m glad I came to this one. It is just as powerful as the other one, special approach and unique style of building up this kind of a poem. Bravo!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you thought enough of my efforts to seek out more. Thanks.
I'll be publishing a book of poetry here soon I call "Memorystones", like kidneystones, but in the mind, and much harder to pass, based on my experiences in war.
Comment from Amsterdam
Some actually cut themselves
Sometimes using a dull knife
Sometimes using a Sharp blade
Sometimes a musicians tune
Can cut just the same
If you look into your soul
You will do the same
Welcome to a fanstory
I'm out, but glad you came
Am
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Some actually cut themselves
Sometimes using a dull knife
Sometimes using a Sharp blade
Sometimes a musicians tune
Can cut just the same
If you look into your soul
You will do the same
Welcome to a fanstory
I'm out, but glad you came
Am
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a most kind review, and most original one
Comment from ameliasjourney
VERY INTERESTING POEM.I HAD BEEN A SELF HARMER WHEN I SUFFERED A NERVOUS BREAKDOWN...KNOW I WRITE POETRY AND JUST SIGNED THE CONTRACT FOR MY FIRST BOOK OF POETRY YESTERDAY!!.,..ITS NOTHING THAT GREAT BUT A REAL ACHIEVEMENT FOR ME.THIS FORM OF POETRY IS A CHALLENGE I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB
AND WELCOME TO FANSTORY... ALL THE BEST
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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VERY INTERESTING POEM.I HAD BEEN A SELF HARMER WHEN I SUFFERED A NERVOUS BREAKDOWN...KNOW I WRITE POETRY AND JUST SIGNED THE CONTRACT FOR MY FIRST BOOK OF POETRY YESTERDAY!!.,..ITS NOTHING THAT GREAT BUT A REAL ACHIEVEMENT FOR ME.THIS FORM OF POETRY IS A CHALLENGE I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB
AND WELCOME TO FANSTORY... ALL THE BEST
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Thank you very much for your welcome and encouragement, and for your kind review.
Comment from juliedickson55
Music is much less painful than blades...
It does fill the ears and soul with sounds.
Music is sorrow or joy, it is hatred or love.
It can invoke feelings that we didn't know existed.
Nice 5-7-5 about music; healing as opposed to harmful.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Music is much less painful than blades...
It does fill the ears and soul with sounds.
Music is sorrow or joy, it is hatred or love.
It can invoke feelings that we didn't know existed.
Nice 5-7-5 about music; healing as opposed to harmful.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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thanks, I'm glad you appreciated it.
Comment from Bindu Saxena
It must be a painful journey of music.A sad music about a long lost loved one?
It is a good one.You attempted a different concept on cutting and it is creative.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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It must be a painful journey of music.A sad music about a long lost loved one?
It is a good one.You attempted a different concept on cutting and it is creative.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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It can be. thanks for the kind words
Comment from nighttripper
A much wiser choice than blades is music. Music is a language we can all understand. You have put together a lovely image here. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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A much wiser choice than blades is music. Music is a language we can all understand. You have put together a lovely image here. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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thank you...yes, music is wiser, but the cuts are deeper.
Comment from terry drake
5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on your poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on your poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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thank you, much appreciated.
Comment from Carrie Carson
By far my preferred method of tormenting myself...often with blues or music requiring beer...
Great form, right on the prompt.
Good luck with this...honest, original and dare I say? cutting. :) Carrie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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By far my preferred method of tormenting myself...often with blues or music requiring beer...
Great form, right on the prompt.
Good luck with this...honest, original and dare I say? cutting. :) Carrie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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thanks, cognac or scotch is my usual accompaniment
Comment from kashmayank
well said saying something in so few words is difficult thing but you did a nice job enjoyed reading it all the best for future
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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well said saying something in so few words is difficult thing but you did a nice job enjoyed reading it all the best for future
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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thanks, I trry
