Comment from originalgentleman

Excellent

Very well written and your words are so heart warming like quiet moments in time. Look forward to reading more of your writings.

 Comment Written 23-May-2012

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reply by the author on 23-May-2012

Thank you. I love your statement "heart warming like quiet moments in time." I hope my Mother likes it when I give it to her on her birthday. I also will look forward to seeing your name again on my reviews. :o)

Comment from Crackerberries

Excellent

I really enjoyed this read to day and I like the refrains of Darkness, Sleep, Cried, Beautiful. Very well done and a nice happy birthday for your mom.

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 Comment Written 23-May-2012

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reply by the author on 23-May-2012

Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem for my Mother. I'm hoping she will like it, too.