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The Edge of Reality

How it feels to be near death

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Comment from Espresso momma
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Hmm, I really felt that last line,' As the light brightens, the great beyond beckons for my withered soul.'. and You were warned. Maybe we should all listen to these warnings. Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

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    Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from HalfHoff
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well how absolutely wonderful to see and read you again - especially on page one! Must be doing pretty good for yourself - eh? Name change I see --- ?? Intriguing write to be sure. Lea Ann

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

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    Thank you so very much for the kind words and review...dark lord
Comment from linsbm
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You made the reader felt your journey little by little as the pressure kept you moving with time limited, and finally find you the end of nowhere and light openned wider gave way your soul to drift. I like the way you wrote this poem by figurative language, words that are used in perfect senses and how you present the picture in vivid imagery. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

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    Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey Dark lord

The Edge of Reality is a dark and most engaging piece. This intriguing work was a pleasure to both read and review. This extended your poetic powers further than you can imagine
Bear

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

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    Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from RUMLOVE1000
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Breathtaking writing!

Seems as tho you may have come close to death first hand because this was a strong, powerful and emotional writing with great amounts of expression used.

I could somewhat feel the pain while reading this poem. Heartfelt lines in every stanza.

Blessings,
Rumlove1000

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    Thank you so very much for the very kind review...dark lord
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Pretty creepy poem this is. Well written and definitely is from the dark side. Haunting in its words and artwork. Interesting that the light brightens, I guess that is somewhat of a happy ending~Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2012

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    Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from Zombie's Woof
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Hi-

Sounds like a total crank binge to me...
haven't been on one of those for quite
a while... day after day though... kinda
gets old eventually...

Excellent work! ZW

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    Thank you so very much for your interpretation of my piece. It was written about my near heart attack last week...dark lord
Comment from Mastery
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Very emotionally charged poetry, author. I liked the strength of your verbs and your images overall...like:

"Inch by inch, the pain increases, the dark one lurks.
Serenity, I am told, will wash away the darkness that
Encapsulates all that I am, I somehow disagree with this notion.
Once again, I am on the move, no time to waste."

Great write. Bob


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    I, once again, thank you for your kind review...dark lord
Comment from keimosobie
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Should have headed those warnings. Hey thanks for giving me my only contest win by not participating in the challenge Don't think I could beat this poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    You could thank this near heart attack, I was in the hospital at the time. Take care and congrats...dark lord
Comment from samriddle
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Great poem. You write with so much depth and sorrow but you are able to transform the heartache of it into a work of art. The emotion in this poem is portrayed brilliantly,
Sam

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    I thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord