Lost in the Woods
Timmy Mouse goes looking for Elves76 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
clothes to go courting...with Millie the Mole?" ... AW... wink! :) :)
Oh, my dear, I adore these delightful capers you create.
Sweet, entrancing - a waltz back into childhood and innocence. You are my rhyming Blyton, Sandra.
Congratulations on your win, and on getting published. (Did you have to go through an agent?) Wow, wow!
Hugs and love,
Sonali xx
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
clothes to go courting...with Millie the Mole?" ... AW... wink! :) :)
Oh, my dear, I adore these delightful capers you create.
Sweet, entrancing - a waltz back into childhood and innocence. You are my rhyming Blyton, Sandra.
Congratulations on your win, and on getting published. (Did you have to go through an agent?) Wow, wow!
Hugs and love,
Sonali xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, my sweet friend! I love it that you have linked my name with Enid Blyton!!!! Awwwww!!!!! I am coming over to give you the biggest hug. :) Sandra xxxxxxx
Comment from Aussie
Congratulations on your All Time Best and Seal of Quality earnings. I really enjoyed your Lost in the Woods, it certainly is your genre. Children must be enthralled. XX
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
Congratulations on your All Time Best and Seal of Quality earnings. I really enjoyed your Lost in the Woods, it certainly is your genre. Children must be enthralled. XX
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, my darling friend! Wow, what a lovely review and you have given me one of your precious 6 stars. Thank you and big, big hugs!! xxxxx Sandra
Comment from heyjude
Sandra, I love your stories about the Hedgerow characters.
I love the sing song rhythm of this. It is so fun. I know
children will love it and I enjoyed reading it, too
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
Sandra, I love your stories about the Hedgerow characters.
I love the sing song rhythm of this. It is so fun. I know
children will love it and I enjoyed reading it, too
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Thank you so very much, Judy, for this wonderful review and for giving me one of your lovely precious 6 stars, that is so very kind of you!! I am delighted you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Douglas Paul
This was a very creative story that I really enjoyed reading. The flow and rhyme is superb and I love the story line. Not surprised you got this published - well done
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
This was a very creative story that I really enjoyed reading. The flow and rhyme is superb and I love the story line. Not surprised you got this published - well done
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, Douglas, Hedgerow Capers took my life over for quite a while, there are 30 stories altogether, of mixed lengths, some quite epic! LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Pyrrho
A bit long for a fan-story post, but well written. The rhyme and meter are consistently excellent and the meter results in good flow and some enjambment. Good for you. Sandra.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
A bit long for a fan-story post, but well written. The rhyme and meter are consistently excellent and the meter results in good flow and some enjambment. Good for you. Sandra.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, Alister, that is so nice of you. When I first joined FS, in 2011, I wrote the first book, this was one of the poems in it, after it was published, I wrote another 25 of them; they took my life over! lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks, my friend. xxx Sandra.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful story poem for children and I can see how it would make a good children's story book. The person who illustrated the story probably had a very fun time doing the art. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
This is a wonderful story poem for children and I can see how it would make a good children's story book. The person who illustrated the story probably had a very fun time doing the art. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, Patricia. Yes, Corrina did a wonderful job, she really went out of her way with the little extra's. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
With so few sixes allotted, there are never enough to go around. I'm just so glad to have one left for this outstanding little trophy piece. Congratulations! on your much deserved success with this marvelous story poem for the children in all of us. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
With so few sixes allotted, there are never enough to go around. I'm just so glad to have one left for this outstanding little trophy piece. Congratulations! on your much deserved success with this marvelous story poem for the children in all of us. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Oh, thank you so much, Ric, for your really lovely review and for the wonderful 6 stars. You are so nice, my friend! :) xsx Sandra
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, I always enjoyed your Hedgerow stories. I am not sure if I ever seen this one. The artwork you use is absolutely fantastic to enhance this great story. Timmy and Tommy Mouse along with Reggie the Rat creates a truly humorous story about children always looking for what they think is real. In your story the Elves are real and happy to see the twins. I love how they play with Reggie after finding him and gives him the ride of his life.
I see all of the awards this story deserved. Have a great day my friend. Love you.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
Sandra, I always enjoyed your Hedgerow stories. I am not sure if I ever seen this one. The artwork you use is absolutely fantastic to enhance this great story. Timmy and Tommy Mouse along with Reggie the Rat creates a truly humorous story about children always looking for what they think is real. In your story the Elves are real and happy to see the twins. I love how they play with Reggie after finding him and gives him the ride of his life.
I see all of the awards this story deserved. Have a great day my friend. Love you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much, my sweet friend! I am so pleased you enjoyed it. I haven't been well, so haven't been posting much, I'm having a few tests done on my heart. I think it's ok, but the doctor wants me checked out as I have been so tired and clammy lately. It's what happens as you get older!!! Thanks again, my friend, love you always. xxx Sandra
Comment from DonandVicki
I do like some of the alliteration that you have in the poetic/prose. I know that children like alliteration and rhyme as well, you have a hit here Sandra.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
I do like some of the alliteration that you have in the poetic/prose. I know that children like alliteration and rhyme as well, you have a hit here Sandra.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Loren (7)
So glad to see that you re-posted this, Sandra. I would have missed it otherwise and not counted this day as delightful as it might have been had I not (read it). In other words thanks for brightening my day with this wonderful, clever and soul-lifting poem. Loren
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
So glad to see that you re-posted this, Sandra. I would have missed it otherwise and not counted this day as delightful as it might have been had I not (read it). In other words thanks for brightening my day with this wonderful, clever and soul-lifting poem. Loren
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you so very much, Loren, what a really lovely review, your comments have put a big smile on my face!! And a big hug for the 6 stars! You are so nice! :) Sandra xxx