rispettos
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Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
A poem that describes the emotions that people feel after someone's demise. But even though we feel sorrow still the cosmos continues to go 'round.
Charlene
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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To adewpearl,
A poem that describes the emotions that people feel after someone's demise. But even though we feel sorrow still the cosmos continues to go 'round.
Charlene
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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thank you, Charlene :-) You are so right. Brooke
Comment from amada
Oh, this is so beautifully enchanting, like an ode to life and death. I like this one so well: "The day I die love's blush will bloom, a babe will breathe his first full breath."
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Oh, this is so beautifully enchanting, like an ode to life and death. I like this one so well: "The day I die love's blush will bloom, a babe will breathe his first full breath."
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Amada, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Brooke, how heart-breaking for you to lose your Mommy so very young. And to be an auntie so young as well. I have to tell you that, without the author notes, this rispetto truly touched me. The author notes just made it even more poignant.
I think you're such a wonderful person.
Hugs
Kat
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Brooke, how heart-breaking for you to lose your Mommy so very young. And to be an auntie so young as well. I have to tell you that, without the author notes, this rispetto truly touched me. The author notes just made it even more poignant.
I think you're such a wonderful person.
Hugs
Kat
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thanks, Kat - I have pictures of me, so young, with those babies on my lap - you should see the look of love in my face. What a proud aunt I was :-) Brooke
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Oh, this is soooo cute, my friend. The idea of the cycle of birth and death is very well presented here. Indeed it's all about different strokes for different folks. kudos
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Oh, this is soooo cute, my friend. The idea of the cycle of birth and death is very well presented here. Indeed it's all about different strokes for different folks. kudos
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Perp, for your kind review :-) Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
I like your thoughts Brooke,
of how you say how God plans to brings a new born babe into the world when ones soul is taken from this Earth
I have always liked the Italian rispetto form which is not easy to compose.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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I like your thoughts Brooke,
of how you say how God plans to brings a new born babe into the world when ones soul is taken from this Earth
I have always liked the Italian rispetto form which is not easy to compose.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Gert, thank you :-) I am glad you found the meaning in this rispetto :-) Brooke
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You are welcome Brooke
Gert
Comment from sgalletti
Very thought provoking rispetto about the circles in life Brooke. I enjoyed the juxtaposition of thoughts about life and death. Sue
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Very thought provoking rispetto about the circles in life Brooke. I enjoyed the juxtaposition of thoughts about life and death. Sue
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thanks, Sue - I truly appreciate your response to this poem. Brooke :-)
Comment from Poetic Friend
Brooke, in your usual flair, you have presented a beautiful poem, packed with awestruck imagery, unique phrasing and alliteration.
I am not advancing your death, but the day you die, the world will lose a great poetess.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Brooke, in your usual flair, you have presented a beautiful poem, packed with awestruck imagery, unique phrasing and alliteration.
I am not advancing your death, but the day you die, the world will lose a great poetess.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thanks so much, Poetic friend :-) I am truly touched by your comments and your most generous review. Brooke
Comment from mstad55
I think everytime we lose a loved one our world stops. Even if it's only a momemt it seems like an eternity and is a moment we will never get back. It's only memories that keeps the past alive, but the world around us never skips a beat, life death and all that is in between is the circle of life. Very well done. Short and says it all. Mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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I think everytime we lose a loved one our world stops. Even if it's only a momemt it seems like an eternity and is a moment we will never get back. It's only memories that keeps the past alive, but the world around us never skips a beat, life death and all that is in between is the circle of life. Very well done. Short and says it all. Mike
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Mike :-) I'm so glad you understand what I'm saying in this poem. Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
This is a completion of poetic thoughts in so many varied ways. I found this piece of poetic art to be well written and to have a very good view of it thinking process. It was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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This is a completion of poetic thoughts in so many varied ways. I found this piece of poetic art to be well written and to have a very good view of it thinking process. It was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, John, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Artasylum
this is the truest of the true...the circle of life no matter which end we are on will continue on... but death does not make your energetic presence here gone. it is not ashes to ashes...it is energy reformed and still alive in well in another form...yours, diana
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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this is the truest of the true...the circle of life no matter which end we are on will continue on... but death does not make your energetic presence here gone. it is not ashes to ashes...it is energy reformed and still alive in well in another form...yours, diana
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Diana. I so appreciate your thoughtful response to this poem. Brooke
