Dear Lexi
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Day of Promise""Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus
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Comment from adewpearl
It is so good to read a Lexi poem again - they are filled with such love and joy - I can just see the smile on your face as this little girl creates rainbow days in your world :-) Brooke
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It is so good to read a Lexi poem again - they are filled with such love and joy - I can just see the smile on your face as this little girl creates rainbow days in your world :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from rmdelta
Jan,
well written poem, my friend. Great descriptives which allow easy imagery and the narration is very smooth.
Well done
Reggie
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Jan,
well written poem, my friend. Great descriptives which allow easy imagery and the narration is very smooth.
Well done
Reggie
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Queenise
Your poem was so short and full of sentiment. I thought it had a good flow. It is sweet. I really liked it. The picture that is with it is awesome. Keep doing what you are doing. Thanks for sharing with us. Queenise
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Your poem was so short and full of sentiment. I thought it had a good flow. It is sweet. I really liked it. The picture that is with it is awesome. Keep doing what you are doing. Thanks for sharing with us. Queenise
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
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Sorry my health issues have caused me to get very far behind and I'm praying you are better, Jan. Love. Queenise
Comment from Amfunny
Oh, what a short but sweet poem to convey your feelings for your grandchild. This was a pleasure to read and review. Good luck with your book.
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Oh, what a short but sweet poem to convey your feelings for your grandchild. This was a pleasure to read and review. Good luck with your book.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Thesis
A beautiful poem from the heart, portraying the joy a grandmother feels being with her grandchild.
I like the reference to the rainbow, which allows endless possibilities to your joy. - Thesis
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A beautiful poem from the heart, portraying the joy a grandmother feels being with her grandchild.
I like the reference to the rainbow, which allows endless possibilities to your joy. - Thesis
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Begin Again
RdfrdMom
Grandchildren are a wonderful and thrilling experience. I just recently became a great grandmother at 60 and today (maybe any minute) I will become a grandmother again too. You have so vividly describe the beauty of sharing those special times and find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow...your grandchild. Enjoy to the max!
Carol
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RdfrdMom
Grandchildren are a wonderful and thrilling experience. I just recently became a great grandmother at 60 and today (maybe any minute) I will become a grandmother again too. You have so vividly describe the beauty of sharing those special times and find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow...your grandchild. Enjoy to the max!
Carol
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from MarcL
A good evocative poem- it seems to be in haiku form but then the syllable count is off by one
spen ding time with you
1 2 3 4 5
col ors my world, each hue
6 7 8 9 10 11
ul ti mate rain bow
12 13 14 15 16
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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A good evocative poem- it seems to be in haiku form but then the syllable count is off by one
spen ding time with you
1 2 3 4 5
col ors my world, each hue
6 7 8 9 10 11
ul ti mate rain bow
12 13 14 15 16
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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thanks, Marci--I will change colors to coloring
love, jan
Comment from L.lora
Very exquisit, a wonderful gift for any child especially a beloved grand child. You have deftly conveyed such deep and binding emotion with very few well chosen words. No nits. Lora
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Very exquisit, a wonderful gift for any child especially a beloved grand child. You have deftly conveyed such deep and binding emotion with very few well chosen words. No nits. Lora
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Heidixoxo
I really enjoyed your beautifully written poem. It was very well written and put together nicely. I also think your choice of art work is fantastic. xoxo
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I really enjoyed your beautifully written poem. It was very well written and put together nicely. I also think your choice of art work is fantastic. xoxo
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from mountainwriter
This is tiny, touching, and beautiful, like a child. And you imply that it's not only that spending time together that's like a rainbow -- grandchildren themselves are like rainbows, too: bright, breathtaking, and often appearing "out of the blue." :) A lovely tribute.
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This is tiny, touching, and beautiful, like a child. And you imply that it's not only that spending time together that's like a rainbow -- grandchildren themselves are like rainbows, too: bright, breathtaking, and often appearing "out of the blue." :) A lovely tribute.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
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I've been gone for months myself (the death of my father sent me into a tailspin) and I just saw this today. You're most welcome. And I hope you're feeling better. :)
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I am so sorry to hear about the passing of your father -- it is never easy and one is never sure how it will affect you -- prayers and blessings for and to you -- love, jan
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Thank you so much. I'm learning a lot about grief -- how powerful it is and how long it goes on. Anyway, your kind words help. :) By the way, I glanced at your bio and love the activities you're involved in. Great work you're doing -- for kids, for everybody. Take care. Fondly, Karen
