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The Minute Poem

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minute poems

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Comment from Firefly54
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Oh, we've just had a quick flurry here in UK. Enough to look at and admire as it fell through the air, but not enough to hide the grass... I've growwn to like the minute form, and this one pleases me with its delightful imagery, especially, "A gust of air assaults packed flakes,"

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    I have come to love this form, so I'm delighted you like my use of it - thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from Brandenpaul
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As a floridian, how I wish to see such scenes from my window. However, I'm sure by this time of year it get very old. It's still warm in late October sometimes November here and that gets old as well. Can't have it both ways I suppose. Very well written with a good message even if unintended. God's creation is free for us to enjoy.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    Yes, extremely old - my son lives in Florida, and I envy both of you! :-) Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from ersorenson
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This is a great poem the pays homage to the beauty of nature. I love the peace of snow, although I hate the inconvenience. If I remember to appreciates the blessings of nature, I'm much happier. Thanks for a nice reminder.
Eric

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    I needed the reminder myself as I was resenting every inconvenient flake :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Fat man Says
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Your great poem is Truly A Six Star but I'm out
just now...Seems everything you write always reads
so easy and very neat...GREAT POETRY...Bob

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    I so appreciate your generous impulses and your most kind response! Thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from BethShelby
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I love this poem and the imagery it evokes. I love the line Trees' shadows painted on the snow" God's gallery
I two prefer formal poems. Your rhyme scheme makes this poem flow and you have chosen the perfect picture to illustrate it.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    Beth, I appreciate your thoughtful comments about my minute poem - good to meet someone who prefers formal poetry :-) Brooke
Comment from Sixteezkid
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Brooke, this is a wonderful 'painting" of words!

My favorite stanza is the 2nd, although, they are all full of imagery and are beautiful. Always love your Minute poems.

Thanks for this lovely piece,
Sue

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
    Sue, thank you so much!! :-) Brooke
Comment from Antie
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I have always had difficulty with quatrains and anything that I have to adhere too. You make it look easy. You have definitely described what is out your window.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
    It is not easy - but gratifying :-) thanks, Brooke
Comment from brightside1099
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There is nothing so beautiful as Mother Nature at her best. Last week I noticed the beautiful red buds on the maple tree next door. I took a photo of a cardinal sitting in the tree and thought, spring is on it's way. Yesterday, I took a photo of the same maple limbs with puffy tufts of snow. Never underestimate Mother Nature.

Great poem with a lovely illustration.

BB

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
    Thank you for sharing that experience with me!! And for the positive review :-) Brooke
Comment from RapturedHeart
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Brooke, this literally brough tears to my eyes. Probably THE best minute poem I've read since joining FanStory. You have BRILLIANTLY showcased the priceless and free beauty of God's creation. Wish I had a ten. Just outstanding. Thanks so much for sharing,
Heather

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
    Heather, I am really moved by your comments - thank you so so much!! Brooke :-)
Comment from samandlancelot
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This is beautiful. I had to read it more than once to appreciate the beauty behind each line describing God's work in His every gallery in what we see. Great job!

Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
    Thank you so much for your most gracious comments! Brooke