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A haiku! A painted desire too!
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i will pray with the flags that we see...they are sacred to our lives and country...thanks so much as usual or a good read kiddo...thanks so much and looking forward..yours diana
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
Wow! That reminds me of our Pledge of Allegience to our countries flag. I always thought it incredible that under God was added. I had the brainstorm of an idea about writing a little prayer book, not creating prayers, but conveying my ideas using the various means of prayers that exists in this world. To me, this Hiaku is a Tricky Dick poem, because if in the last line you think of the prayers themselves, then it turns into a Senyru.
I really appreciate your review and thank you for the compliments. Yours, Mike
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