Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

Wow the last work, the great story continues, with the chapters, I loved these characters, and the way the story keeps you wanting more, no errors and I thought it is excellet.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008

Hi Grace,

Thanks so much for the cool review. I'm so glad you liked this chapter and hope to see you again soon!

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I'll be so taken with surprise
if I find an error in your work,
I'll likely fall off my seat.
As always, your work is so well
presented, easy to follow and holding
the interest to the end.

A real pleasure to review.
Margaret.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008

Well, Margaret,

You make me blush with pleasure. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments and your continued interest in my story. I can't thank you enough<

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Gayle.
Great the way you have everyone transfixed on the motion detector, bringing all the individuals ?together?.
Excellent scenes of the ruskies escape. I think it's better you have them talkin in plain English as becaise they're all Russian they'd be talking in Russian to each other rather than with accents when they're addressing the yanks. If you get my meaning.
Excellent chapter.
Best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

I agree, kind sir. Several other reviewers mentioned they'd just talk Russian alone like that. No more accents!

Thanks so much for stopping by and for being such a loyal reader...I know you don't like this stuff usually, so your loyalty means even more.

Thanks again

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Readywriter52

Excellent

In this chapter it looks like everyone is playing hide and seek. No one knows where anyone else is. Which is a good way to shoot someone you don't want to shoot. I hope no one gets shot by accident.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

LOL! RW, this is true. I figure someone has to start bumping into someone else pretty soon.

Thanks so much for the fine comments. You're so appreciated.

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from butterflykiss

Excellent

Oh my, we're still in trouble, but the Russians are in a fix also, they know the cops are near, I sure hope they get caught before they get away.
Thanks for sharing, it was great getting to read two chapter together, makes it much more interesting.
Butterflykiss

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

Hey Jane,

Yes, it's so much better that way...like reading a real book.

Thanks so much for the great comments!

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by butterflykiss on 23-Oct-2008

Hello Gayle, yes I do and it fixes the story a little better in your mind.
Jane-butterflykiss

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Gayle, that is one of the coolest ideas I've ever read about: motion detectors in the bushes. I'm going to have to consider that for my property, particularly out back where my pups romp at night before they retire for the night. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

Oh Jan, y'know, they're really cool, especially if your dogs are out at night.

I had made such a big deal out of how dark it was it made me have to do something so they might see each other. Jeff mentioned light/motion sensors and saved my bacon. I was beginning to get scared!

Thanks so much for the loyalty and great comments! You're so appreciated!

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Shane Marquardt

Excellent

Enjoyed the chapter. You had good action and strong dialogue. Look forward to your next chapter. Curious what happens next.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

Hi Shane...love that name.

So nice to meet you. I admire your stamina...coming into the ending chapter of a book is never easy, and this one, well, good for you. Gives me the feeling I might be on the right track here.

Thanks so much for stopping by and I hope to see you again!

Gayle

Comment from trudy

Excellent

Very good.Your characterizations are excellent and you seem to know your stuff aoubt clandestine movement and motion detectors.The suspense is good. Will they be caught? I'm eager to know what happens next. trudy

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

Hi Trudy,

Well, this is my lucky day...I've made three new friends! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. We're in the ending chapter, so you'll have your answers soon...if the characters will ever let me end this novel!

Thanks again<~>
Gayle

Comment from Korton

Excellent

Another very interesting chapter Gayle. The bad guys seem to be moving about the property, but where are Cancice and Andy? Are they aware of the Ruskies presence? You definitely got the wheels turning with this one. Oh, the possibilities. Very well done.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

LOL! Frank. I guess they're all gonna do a Keystone Cops thing here and start backing into each other. Man, this one has given me fits. The characters will not let go and until I can find Tony, nothing happens!

Thanks again, my friend,

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Very well written with a smooth flow of words leading to a very smooth read. It has good imagery and descriptive scheme. Gayle, you have set up the showdown perfectly. Very good work.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008

Oh Charlie, I hope so. It's been hard ending this one...the characters are hanging on like grim death and I have to find Tony! LOL!

Thank you so much for the great comments,

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 23-Oct-2008

You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie