Comment from PUPA

Excellent

In your review, those words were already very influencial and strong, as I stated before. I love how you presented them in two different colors with that artwork too.
Thank you for mentioning me in your notes also referring to my poem. I know we all inspire each other, when it comes to true, deep feelings.
Take care of yourself, keep well.
Love
Pupa

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008

It is now three colors and an additional stanza. I also wanted this piece to have a more tributary and memorializing feeling to it. Also, perhaps a little more uplifting. Thank you so much for your compliments and this review. It is very appreciated,too.
With love, Mike

reply by PUPA on 28-Aug-2008

I like that addition very much. Well done Mike.
You might like to consider the color yellow (orange?) instead of the white, so that it matches the artwork! But that is entirely up to you. Pupa
Actually white is suitable to the subjet, now I am confusing you!!

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008

Just having a little fun that caused my fingeures to fall off? Eh Personally, I felt that yellow is a little to powerful and pigmenty, so I split the difference and when with one with a good heaping of white. I think it works very nicely. Have a great day, I'm off to work.

Comment from P1

Excellent

thanks for letting me know mike i have read it and
it certainly lifts the poem, this was a good choice
by you to add an extra verse. you did it really quickly
are you this quick at everything you do lol>>
i have already read and reviewed pupa's poem
not sure how it came about but there was
such sadness in her introduction it took my
breath away, thanks for the other link. your
own poem is very sad, so many people we have
loved and lost and as garth brooks once said
if tomorrow never comes... we should be preapred
hugs lynda.

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008

Yikes, I didn't want this to be so sad, so I will be adding another verse that has the ability to be up lifting. It will take a while to think, but as soon as I do, you bet! Thank you so much for this review. With love, Mike

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008

I just wanted to let you know that the additional lines were added. Thank you very much.