Gossamer Thoughts
Just a poetic thought that came to me.14 total reviews
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
Mike, this is wonderful. I'm happy to see you writing. It is always a pleasure. Your poem is full of great imagery. Great job! Hugs, Sara
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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Mike, this is wonderful. I'm happy to see you writing. It is always a pleasure. Your poem is full of great imagery. Great job! Hugs, Sara
Comment Written 01-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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I fixed things up since this review and feel it is even much better. I thank you very much for those compliments and this review. I send you my hugs too, Mike.
Comment from Rajasir
Sublime thoughts! You have spoken through the persona's voice and given your heart to every line.It is really admirable.
Bless you,
Rajasir
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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Sublime thoughts! You have spoken through the persona's voice and given your heart to every line.It is really admirable.
Bless you,
Rajasir
Comment Written 01-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Sometimes, I feel these poems come from someone else and sent though that heart. Mike
Comment from Moira's Amethyst
"I hope all of these thoughts weave
together into a beautifully painted scene
and are your warmth on comfort so
you never have any bad dreams."
I really enjoyed how this poem really carried itself. It had a tone that captured my interest and a pace that was rejuvenating. I haven't critique and wish you the best. Please, take care.
Poetry's Protege
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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"I hope all of these thoughts weave
together into a beautifully painted scene
and are your warmth on comfort so
you never have any bad dreams."
I really enjoyed how this poem really carried itself. It had a tone that captured my interest and a pace that was rejuvenating. I haven't critique and wish you the best. Please, take care.
Poetry's Protege
Comment Written 01-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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Considering I consider your poetry finer then mine, it is an honor to hear such words. Thank you for sharing with me your favorite stanza, the compliments and this review. I just added some authors note to this too
You also my friend, take care as well. . -Mike
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Mike, I really like this piece. As writers of poetry, I believe we all aspire to give a piece of ourselves to others in hopes of improving their lives in some small way. I noted one piece of spag for you below:
along you path hoping along. >>
along your path hopping along.
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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Mike, I really like this piece. As writers of poetry, I believe we all aspire to give a piece of ourselves to others in hopes of improving their lives in some small way. I noted one piece of spag for you below:
along you path hoping along. >>
along your path hopping along.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2008
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I slagged the spag. Thank you for the correction, the compliments and this review. In today's world, who really cares about poetry... But many people that I met do remember something from a poem that thouched them enough to remember. To me that's the real feeling, I really appreciate when I find a piece opened. This poem is also about the lasting effect of a chance meeting can have on us as well.
