High Tech Intruder
Caught off guard (Fictional)38 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Oh wow Debi now this is an interesting poem... a Crescendo Poem... such fun...
I really enjoyed it...
Always good to learn something new....
Your friend, Lisa......
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Oh wow Debi now this is an interesting poem... a Crescendo Poem... such fun...
I really enjoyed it...
Always good to learn something new....
Your friend, Lisa......
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Sweetie, so this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It sounds like an interesting form.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and story.
-There is smooth flow from line to line.
-You are braver than I am; I wouldn't
go near the door!
-You have a great twist at the end.
-I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It sounds like an interesting form.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and story.
-There is smooth flow from line to line.
-You are braver than I am; I wouldn't
go near the door!
-You have a great twist at the end.
-I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Pam, so this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi, and thanks for sharing.
Comment from hullabaloo22
Brilliant! I could really sense the embarrassment caused by that final line. Crescendo sounds like an interesting poetry form, but also one that would be quite a challenge. This was a wonderful example.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Brilliant! I could really sense the embarrassment caused by that final line. Crescendo sounds like an interesting poetry form, but also one that would be quite a challenge. This was a wonderful example.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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So this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from DeboraDyess
HA! I can see that happening, actually. I got a new phone and still don't recognize the ringtones. I guess I could go in anf change them but... Yup, I'm that lazy! Ha! ð?"±
Fun poem, Debi. I think I'll try it. I still have 4-5 poems to write for this month so it will be something different!
Blessings, sweetie!
Deb
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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HA! I can see that happening, actually. I got a new phone and still don't recognize the ringtones. I guess I could go in anf change them but... Yup, I'm that lazy! Ha! ð?"±
Fun poem, Debi. I think I'll try it. I still have 4-5 poems to write for this month so it will be something different!
Blessings, sweetie!
Deb
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Deb, so this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Do you think you could give me your birthday one more time? If I don't write something down right away I forget.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting poetry form, one I never heard of in college creative writing. You all are helping me learn poetry with great poems like this one. It is also very amusing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is an interesting poetry form, one I never heard of in college creative writing. You all are helping me learn poetry with great poems like this one. It is also very amusing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Carol. So this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
An excellent crescendo poem Dear Debi, this could be similar to nonetheless etheree poems in essence I one started with one syllable, great theme though dear girl, clever girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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An excellent crescendo poem Dear Debi, this could be similar to nonetheless etheree poems in essence I one started with one syllable, great theme though dear girl, clever girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks Roy, yeah, I had a hard time keeping the meter right on.
So this may be fiction, but I am such a tech nut that I am always changing my wallpaper, my ringtones and adding apps or something all the time. But I could still see myself forgetting and hearing the noise.
Thanks for the kind words my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Bless you Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
This form of poetry sounds like it would be a challenge, but you were able to accomplish it and do it in rhyme. I enjoyed the cute story you created that included a humorous ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This form of poetry sounds like it would be a challenge, but you were able to accomplish it and do it in rhyme. I enjoyed the cute story you created that included a humorous ending. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you my sweet friend, and I think I told you that Kenzie said to say hello to you, didn't I? One of her good friends will be joining us here, and I will be introducing her this week. She is a sweetheart. And I am hoping that my really good friends here will fan her and help make her feel welcome. I have already told her what not to do, but had her read the book of reviewing so that will help.
thanks so much for your kind words for the poem as it was a little challenging to keep some kind of meter going. I appreciate it so much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Debi, this is a nice poem. It was well written and funny. The rhyming was done very good. I liked the pink color you used. I've only learning about poems. I've never heard of a crescendo poem. Very good job.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Debi, this is a nice poem. It was well written and funny. The rhyming was done very good. I liked the pink color you used. I've only learning about poems. I've never heard of a crescendo poem. Very good job.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Brenda. Thanks so much for your kind words for the poem as it was a little challenging to keep some kind of meter going. I appreciate it so much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love this poem, Debi. it's the type of thing that I'd do! Did it really happen to you? It was so funny. The Crescendo form is very well done, and the rhyming has been delivered really well considering the different syllable counts. I really enjoyed it, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I love this poem, Debi. it's the type of thing that I'd do! Did it really happen to you? It was so funny. The Crescendo form is very well done, and the rhyming has been delivered really well considering the different syllable counts. I really enjoyed it, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi there Sandra, and thanks so much for your kind words for the poem as it was a little challenging to keep some kind of meter going. I appreciate it so much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You do well with trying out new styles of poetry. I like how you told a little story here, but the best part was the surprise ending and the joke on yourself!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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You do well with trying out new styles of poetry. I like how you told a little story here, but the best part was the surprise ending and the joke on yourself!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Dearest Verna, thanks so much for your kind words for the poem as it was a little challenging to keep some kind of meter going. I appreciate it so much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi