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Anzac Day 25 th April

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Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Yay, Jannypan! This war history tribute is for you and all the soldiers who fought in the war and lived on in our hearts and minds. They are the true believers who fight the good fight on and on until one day we will find peaceful contentment and deliverance from all evil.
Jesse

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Hello Jesse, Yes, Jannypan came to mind and because she is in heaven I thought to write a poem to honor the fallen, she always did. She passed too quickly but still with us all. K xx
reply by Jesse James Doty on 09-Apr-2024
    It's good to follow in her footsteps.
    She was a wonderful person.
    Keep up the good work.
    Jesse
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    OK.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a powerful verse, Kay, honouring and commemorating all the military personnel who died in battle. You set a chilling scene in which the living pay their respects to the dead and yet, into this poignancy and cold wind, you infuse the warmth and comfort of the sun and your deep faith. It is a stirring message that the living will be united with those they mourn. Just one small edit: reve(i)lle.
Thank you so much for sharing this inspiring free verse and I wish you luck. Debbie x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Hello my friend Debbie, I wrote this because Jannypan always honored the fallen. She passed too quickly and we all miss her. Yes, I realized I left the 'i' out so I will put it back 👍 Thanks so much for your lovely comments. Blessings, K xx
Comment from jlsavell
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Kace, good morning!

By the way I loved your poem of the month! I'm so busy right now but will send a huge review.

Though the competing poems were all good, this took a lot of gumption to write and thank you!


Now to this poem!

Jan and I connected through the political forum. We became good friends and conversed often through pm and email.

Though she thought quite diametrically from my political beliefs, we respected each other and she was well respected in the political forum except for one or two who , actually, respected no one.

The things Jan and I had in common far outweighed any disagreements over political discourse.

One, was our military. Both she and I had dealing and had/ have become involved in veterans and The Veterans Administration.

As a caregiver to my ex who is a Viet Nam Vet and my two older sons who are also vets, I have become passionate and a staunch advocate for their care and their stability. Up until a year or so, I volunteered weekly at our Veteran!s Administration and have learned such a great deal.


One thing Jan would be excited about is Biden's administration introduced The Pact Act.

The PACT Act is a law that expands VA health care and benefits for Veterans exposed to burn pits, Agent Orange, and other toxic substances. This law helps us provide generations of Veterans--and their survivors--with the care and benefits they've earned and deserve.

The new 2024 proposal mandatory funding includes $160.0 billion in traditional benefits to Veterans, plus $1.9 billion for construction and $20.3 billion for the Cost of War Toxic Exposures Fund (TEF). VA anticipates supporting 453,824 Full-time Equivalent (FTE) staff in 2024 using all funding sources.

Also their disability benefits are being raised.

This is exciting news and a far cry from an orange buffoon who labeled veterans as losers(the late John McCain).

Thank you for bringing to the forefront the immense sacrifices our soldiers and other countries soldiers make for freedom and democracy.


You are truly the best.


Your friend always
Jimi

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Did you get the Easter card I sent? It was a Email card. I'm glad I brought your memories of Jan back. Pity they couldn't have the money for Agent Orange when it happened. So many continued to die from cancer. Unlike you, we are not into politics. Being a small country with only 7 states. Each state governs itself. With any friendship, if we can put aside our own beliefs and respect others, that is true friendship. Have a look in spam for your Easter card? love Kace XXX
Comment from royowen
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What an incredibly kind thing to do for Jan, but that looks like the ghosts of the battle fo Beersheba, the charge that finished the Ottoman Empire. But such a lovey thought and a wonderful post, a wonderful poem Kay, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Yes, I had a photo I didn't like and I grabbed the actual painting of the Charge for Beersheba. I might look for another. Thanks for reading Roy, much appreciated. K xx
reply by royowen on 09-Apr-2024
    The yanks won?t know, it?s a good photo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    The new photo is a beautiful shot of a young man around 20 wearing a slouch hat. All better now :-)
reply by royowen on 09-Apr-2024
    That?s Good
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    I was upset when I saw on the News. The gay mob are pushing to be married in a consecrated church? What do you think Roy?
reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2024
    I hate it Kay, the govt, will probably make them,
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    The Pope hasn't answered them. I guess there is nothing we can do to stop it. So many horrible things are happening. Still, the devil may play but God will chain him for 10,000 years. Have a nice Sunday. K xx
reply by royowen on 14-Apr-2024
    Amen
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful and touching read, yes, we must and do honor all those past and present, those who were lost in ant war, will surely be present, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading. We will remember them. Blessings, Kay.