Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aw, Santha, that is so sad, or is it? Were those few footsteps closed? Did they come together? You leave us wondering, I'm hoping that they met and that all was well. What a lovely contest entry for the Haiku club! Well done! Warmest hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

It would have been nice .But 'that had stood' sounds more negative than positive...Thank you very much for stopping by and I am sorry for this delay in replying....

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, sometimes only a few moonlight steps is all it takes. LOL I enjoyed reading. Wonderful job of writing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for topping by

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The anticipation here is magical and I enjoyed your romantic and tantalising post for the club, I enjoyed the read, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x x x x x

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for stopping by ..I am sorry for the delay in reply...

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

and then what happened??? Did you close the gap? Peeked in a window? Or dreamt the night away thinking if only I ... but the answer cannot be written in a two line poem .... unless the lines are very, very, very long.

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024

peeked in a window .gives me ne w ideas...
thank you for stopping by .Sorry for the delay in replying