Genus passiflora - passion fruit
cocktail - 1 -part 115 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Lady is struggling to let go of old circumstance, and makes a symbolic gesture in placing her ring in a glass of water for new beginnings and she hopes for new horizons and realities, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Lady is struggling to let go of old circumstance, and makes a symbolic gesture in placing her ring in a glass of water for new beginnings and she hopes for new horizons and realities, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Typo : if you have (two) glasses...
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Mr. Roy, I hope you are having an amazing summer with your beautiful daughters and grandkids.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
As ever, Iza, a delightful script with your own special stamp on it. Your characters emerge so skilfully as does your story and message. And there is always humour and an enjoyment of human nature. Small edit: 7th dialogue para from the bottom starting Unnoticed by the waiter.... Then (sighing) takes the glass... Well done on another excellent post! Debbie
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As ever, Iza, a delightful script with your own special stamp on it. Your characters emerge so skilfully as does your story and message. And there is always humour and an enjoyment of human nature. Small edit: 7th dialogue para from the bottom starting Unnoticed by the waiter.... Then (sighing) takes the glass... Well done on another excellent post! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Letting go after a long relationship is the hardest thing to do but we always know inside our heart that when it is not working, it will end. It is better to accept it and move on, a fine post Iza, I would love to try that cocktail! love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Letting go after a long relationship is the hardest thing to do but we always know inside our heart that when it is not working, it will end. It is better to accept it and move on, a fine post Iza, I would love to try that cocktail! love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Me too:) I will order it once I get in bar:)
Comment from lyenochka
That's nice scene and a great way to say farewell to her ex-husband. She created a new recipe and the chef now has a new item for his menu. I wonder if the waiter will be a new love interest now.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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That's nice scene and a great way to say farewell to her ex-husband. She created a new recipe and the chef now has a new item for his menu. I wonder if the waiter will be a new love interest now.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Nah, too predictable:)
Comment from Janilou
Not sure if you are aware that you can remove a post if you accidentally post it. You can disable and edit it.
Hope that helps if that's what is going on.
Jan
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Not sure if you are aware that you can remove a post if you accidentally post it. You can disable and edit it.
Hope that helps if that's what is going on.
Jan
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Hi Janilou I'm so sorry that i' ve mislead you with this post. I just didn't wanted to lose the chance to post. Now the story is ready.
