Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "in a field of wishes"I dare you....
17 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The poem sounds delightful! The author's words are calming, relaxing,
comforting, tranquil and creative. I pondered on the times I was at a
place like this and it was filled with peace. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is great and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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The poem sounds delightful! The author's words are calming, relaxing,
comforting, tranquil and creative. I pondered on the times I was at a
place like this and it was filled with peace. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is great and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you harmony :-)
Comment from John Ciarmello
Well done my friend! You passed this one with flying colors. Okay I have a challenge for you: Describe any fanart of your choice with a single word. It must have four syllables and the consonants (D) (C) along with the vowel (A) in the second syllable. The word must also include an ending suffix of itis.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Well done my friend! You passed this one with flying colors. Okay I have a challenge for you: Describe any fanart of your choice with a single word. It must have four syllables and the consonants (D) (C) along with the vowel (A) in the second syllable. The word must also include an ending suffix of itis.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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hmm will look for a pic and think of a word....
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wait.... isn't a word ending in itis a disease??
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Yeah, that's a bit limiting and possibly dark. How about boring, (ing)
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okay :)
Comment from in777wr#
We written poem. The poem flows well. The first line of this poem is strong, with a positive message that "hope's alive in a field of wishes," your poem, in my opinion, also speaks of a place of peacefulness, and maybe because hope is alive peace is present. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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We written poem. The poem flows well. The first line of this poem is strong, with a positive message that "hope's alive in a field of wishes," your poem, in my opinion, also speaks of a place of peacefulness, and maybe because hope is alive peace is present. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you 7 :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a really beautiful poem--made me smile with its vivid descriptions of a place of undeterred joy and peace. You have used EXCEPTIONALLY expressive repeat lines. BRAVO!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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This is a really beautiful poem--made me smile with its vivid descriptions of a place of undeterred joy and peace. You have used EXCEPTIONALLY expressive repeat lines. BRAVO!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you janice :-)
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Your poem was light and fun. A great place to dream in the 'field of wishes where dreams come true'. We should all visit such a place often. Thank you for the uplifting words.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Your poem was light and fun. A great place to dream in the 'field of wishes where dreams come true'. We should all visit such a place often. Thank you for the uplifting words.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you rachel :-)
Comment from Eternal Muse
I feel like I submerged in the field of dreams when I read this poem. There is such a dream-like quality about it. Loved your imagery, visuals and great presentation.
Excellent choice of an artwork.
These stand out:
picked daisy petals drift on the wind you can accrue
in a large open free space
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I feel like I submerged in the field of dreams when I read this poem. There is such a dream-like quality about it. Loved your imagery, visuals and great presentation.
Excellent choice of an artwork.
These stand out:
picked daisy petals drift on the wind you can accrue
in a large open free space
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you em :-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this challenge poem. It was beautifully written. I have often been in a field and was always amazed at how much peace was there. We need more peace in our lives.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading this challenge poem. It was beautifully written. I have often been in a field and was always amazed at how much peace was there. We need more peace in our lives.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you barbara :-)
