Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This story, Visitors, imagines that aliens would be taken with our dogs and that those canines would also be interested in the little green men. Perhaps they will return.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Supe

Excellent

bounds towards the aliens barking...should have a comma - aliens, barking
What a great little story. I enjoyed everything about it. Fast moving and enjoyable. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks for the suggestion. I am often confused about where to put commas. Thanks again. Elaine

reply by Supe on 29-Jun-2021

you are welcome.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is funny. I like that the aliens are so fascinated with the dogs that they ignore the humans. They must have reported back to the folks on their planet that it's a dog's world here on earth. The aliens are so fascinated they want to come back for further study of the dogs. Their superiors don't seem to be buying it, though. The aliens might not be received such an enthusiastic greeting from the earthlings had they been able to see them. Great story. You might consider using action verbs instead of being verbs like is and were. For instance, instead of Alfred is overjoyed, use Alfred enjoys. judi

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks for your suggestions, action verbs would work much better. I have no idea where some of these crazy fantasy stories come from. More to come. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 29-Jun-2021

You're welcome. Keep up with those stories! It's easy to fall into using lots of being verbs, but action verbs will add more to a story. judi

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

A very interesting tale about a tail. It seems the main intention of the landing was diverted by the presence of dogs. Who knew? They were surprised and enthralled. Good point.

Ralf

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Smiles, mermaid I smiled as I was reading your tale of the green aliens and the friendly dogs who were attracted to these green aliens that were invisible to us human.
By the way Mermaids just to let you know that you are very creative
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Yes, my imagination can run wild. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Elaine

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an absorbing read, you put the mind of the reader in that of both canine and alien, maybe dogs can see them and that starts the barking, while the aliens would have many questions, very well presented****kahpot

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Lisa Marcelina

Excellent

I thought this to be a rather creative and well-written story. Usually, when you read stories about aliens they either plan to take over earth or make a friend with a lonely human.

But the interest in dogs was a different take and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

All the best
Lisa

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks so much. Elaine