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Illusionary Consent

There's no place like home.

15 total reviews 
Comment from Leann DS
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I like this poem. It flows well and the rhymes are catchy. When I read it, I think about someone in an unhappy relationship. What did you think about when you wrote it? Hugs.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    Hi Leann. Thank you for your kind words on my poem, "Illusionary Consent". You had asked what my thoughts were to inspire me to write about this lioness. The eyes of this beautiful creature just filled my soul with feelings. The words just seemed to flow. Thanks once again.
Comment from royowen
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This is short, bit certainly satisfies the requirements of this contest and beyond. You have written a most articulate entry in this entry, I can only stand in admiration, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Well, my thanks to you, for such kind comments! Photography is my other favorite pastime and to capture such beauty at close range, deserves to be written about. LOL! Thanks again, so much!
reply by royowen on 07-Feb-2021
    Good job
Comment from Tgadzthe1
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The illusion of how peaceful she looks despite being caged spoke volumes to me .Calming in the midst of calamity, a humbling acceptance shows strength in adversity.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your words. I feel for these beautiful animals who may miss their, "Home sweet home."
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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They no longer need to hunt when they are in captivity and apathy sets in, this is not how these animals should live, I enjoyed your few words here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you so very much. These few words were meant to fill a huge statement. My gratitude for your kind review.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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Out of all the lioness offerings, this piece is my favorite. The images are remarkably clear. Her purpose and intent are so strong. "Humble acceptance"...lovely.

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you so very much. I took quite pleasure to describe my personal emotions from this beautiful animal.