Writings From the Heart
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Comment from laren
This is a great poem which tell us about The First World War. At the end in a war any one wins. And ever, ever is pain. It's very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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This is a great poem which tell us about The First World War. At the end in a war any one wins. And ever, ever is pain. It's very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you laren
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello Deepwater,
This is a strong poem. You write fluently and your confidence comes through. You did a great job, through the workings of your brilliant imagination, of entering into the feelings and situation of a World War 1 soldier writing home. I would imagine you probably hit the nail on the head.
Cheers, W ^-^
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Hello Deepwater,
This is a strong poem. You write fluently and your confidence comes through. You did a great job, through the workings of your brilliant imagination, of entering into the feelings and situation of a World War 1 soldier writing home. I would imagine you probably hit the nail on the head.
Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you W
Comment from midgev
Stark images of war, any war. This is a poem that haunts and without asking, demands to know if the horror of war is worth it. Excellent job, I liked it very much.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Stark images of war, any war. This is a poem that haunts and without asking, demands to know if the horror of war is worth it. Excellent job, I liked it very much.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
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thank you midgev
Comment from smileycloud
hey
very aptly under the heading of writings from the heart
strong emotional well connected piece
you have written and delivered very well indeed
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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hey
very aptly under the heading of writings from the heart
strong emotional well connected piece
you have written and delivered very well indeed
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you smiley
Comment from MJMuraco
I was touched by the words in this poem. I also learned something about world war one that I was not familiar with. Your poem is powerful and well written.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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I was touched by the words in this poem. I also learned something about world war one that I was not familiar with. Your poem is powerful and well written.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you MJ
Comment from ulster3
Hi deepwater.
This is a great story/letter in poetic art form. Your choice of words rings so true. You seem to have a real connection with your roots. (as per your bio) Personally, I am drawn to this kind of work. You are talented.
Rebecca
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Hi deepwater.
This is a great story/letter in poetic art form. Your choice of words rings so true. You seem to have a real connection with your roots. (as per your bio) Personally, I am drawn to this kind of work. You are talented.
Rebecca
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you Rebecca
Comment from honeytree
The tragedies of war, and those who died or injured in war.
Wars are still going on today.
When will we wake up to no war on our earth?
The art work here is very telling. Many tears shed within this church, for someone loved and died for all of us.
Honey tree.
So many died fighting and killing another human being.
Many lived with injury and pain until they eventually died.
Prisoners of war were persecuted, many died others lived and would have nightmares for a long time.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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The tragedies of war, and those who died or injured in war.
Wars are still going on today.
When will we wake up to no war on our earth?
The art work here is very telling. Many tears shed within this church, for someone loved and died for all of us.
Honey tree.
So many died fighting and killing another human being.
Many lived with injury and pain until they eventually died.
Prisoners of war were persecuted, many died others lived and would have nightmares for a long time.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thanks for reading honey
Comment from skye
The soldiers write such profound letter, such deep and thoughtful messages, that can only come from people who are facing death and destruction.
Wonderful poem about life and death and its futility.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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The soldiers write such profound letter, such deep and thoughtful messages, that can only come from people who are facing death and destruction.
Wonderful poem about life and death and its futility.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you Skye
Comment from Gideon Roth
Good job on this. It felt as if it was written from the heart and I appreciated having come across it tonight. Keep up the good writing...Gideon
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Good job on this. It felt as if it was written from the heart and I appreciated having come across it tonight. Keep up the good writing...Gideon
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you Gideon
Comment from Valkarie
I like this because...You've picked a subject that I love the First WW. Although we all know how horrible it was, or should I say can only imagine what it was like. I collect books on the F.W.W.
Your piece is very graphic in detail with a powerful image and a visual description. A very creative piece of writing concise and very creative and at the same time emotional.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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I like this because...You've picked a subject that I love the First WW. Although we all know how horrible it was, or should I say can only imagine what it was like. I collect books on the F.W.W.
Your piece is very graphic in detail with a powerful image and a visual description. A very creative piece of writing concise and very creative and at the same time emotional.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you Valkarie
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Your very welcome.
V...
