A Tiger Roused Me from My Sleep
rhyming quatrains in 8/7/8/7143 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, Brooke, that was brilliantly funny! Your Miranda should be on commission for all the inspiration she is giving you! LOL, I bet Sawyer will love this one, it really is a boys fun poem. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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LOL, Brooke, that was brilliantly funny! Your Miranda should be on commission for all the inspiration she is giving you! LOL, I bet Sawyer will love this one, it really is a boys fun poem. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hey, I gave her birth - after that ordeal she owes me! LOL Thanks so much, Sandra :-) Brooke
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LOL!! I must remember that one! xx
Comment from krys123
Brooke, An exceptional poem which I enjoyed so much that I'm sorry to say I don't have a six star rating for you. This poem was written very well in meter and rhythm and tempo and the rhyming was done so well that neither of your rhymes were forced nor labored and was still in context with the story while you rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem.
Your imagery was so frightening descriptive and artistically expressive throughout that had me thinking that you would have been dinner for the Tiger.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and I hope you have a happy Fourth of July.
Alex
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Brooke, An exceptional poem which I enjoyed so much that I'm sorry to say I don't have a six star rating for you. This poem was written very well in meter and rhythm and tempo and the rhyming was done so well that neither of your rhymes were forced nor labored and was still in context with the story while you rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem.
Your imagery was so frightening descriptive and artistically expressive throughout that had me thinking that you would have been dinner for the Tiger.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and I hope you have a happy Fourth of July.
Alex
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, Alex :-) I do appreciate your wish for a sixth star! Brooke :-) And a happy Fourth to you too :-)
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke it is always an entertaining spectacle for me to read your poultry.
Alex
Comment from Sasha
The imagery you convey with this one is beyond awesome. I recall when I was a kid (oh, so many years ago) I often had scary dreams just like this one. Marvelous work with this one. I really got a kick out of it.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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The imagery you convey with this one is beyond awesome. I recall when I was a kid (oh, so many years ago) I often had scary dreams just like this one. Marvelous work with this one. I really got a kick out of it.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Valerie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
