Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a cool mixture of a minute poem assignment and a choice capture of father and son learning about sharing. The learning never really ends when it comes to sweet treats.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Bill :-) Brooke

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Now we see the Sawyer and the guilty party of making things happen. Just keep a sharing heart. Good character. Thanks Brooke. Great photo. Shalom

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

I learn so much here - I have never heard of a minute poem. I shall have to study more!

What is water ice? Is it like an Italian ice or sherbert? Regardless, your poem is adorable. I can see Sawyer thinking aloud!

Another triumph.

AT=/

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

AT, yes, it is Italian ice, very popular here in PA where there are lots of Rita's. My daughter and son-in-law were ecstatic when Rita's opened franchises in California, and now Sawyer is thrilled too. LOL :-) Brooke

reply by Acquired Taste on 02-Feb-2014

I remember, as a id in NYC, getting an Italian ice and squeezing the paper cup for all it was worth. Now here in Virginia... nothing remotely like it. I miss so much from childhood. Have a blessed evening. jd

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Water ice? something like sherbert? I've never heard of a minute poem until today, another new one on me. Of course the picture of our little star and his daddy are perfect. I like the feel of this style of poem. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Water ice is a wonderful food that just got imported to California from my area, and my daughter and son-in-law are thrilled as they have missed it so much. It's not really that much like sherbet and not really like shaved ice - it's its own food group and really really really good :-) Sawyer kept saying "Yummy ice." LOL
Thanks so much, Janie :-) Brooke

Comment from krys123

Excellent

I really enjoyed this minute poem and I could see it complemented by the picture. I saw high you continued on which are sentenced to reach first. Is that popular any minute poem. Thank you for sharing this Brooke with everyone. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your cute and fun minute poem. You should have entered it into the contest. Delightful to read Brooke:)
~Teresa~

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Teresa. I have boycotted blind contests since they were first introduced :-) Brooke

reply by TAB_that's me on 02-Feb-2014

I understand but I guess they do inspire us sometimes:)

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

I used to enter the prompts all the time for the first year and a half I was here and won my fair share of them. They do inspire. I miss entering them :-)

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Oh, this is my second Minute Poem in an hour. Loved this one also and just finds these Minute Poems really fascinating. Great job.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014