Surcease
a mirage poem168 total reviews
Comment from words
I do love the word "surcease" and you have used it so marvelously here, Brooke
Also love this repeating form.
Seems like we were both having the same grand morning.
Hugs, you fan, d
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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I do love the word "surcease" and you have used it so marvelously here, Brooke
Also love this repeating form.
Seems like we were both having the same grand morning.
Hugs, you fan, d
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Thanks so very much, Diane :-) Brooke
Comment from flippant
Again, I'm lovin' this mirage form! Excellent poem that invokes the peace of early morning. I'll have to look up the word "surcease" (learn something new every day, eh?). Thanks for introducing me to this form, I'm looking forward to playing around with it.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Again, I'm lovin' this mirage form! Excellent poem that invokes the peace of early morning. I'll have to look up the word "surcease" (learn something new every day, eh?). Thanks for introducing me to this form, I'm looking forward to playing around with it.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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flippant, thank you so very much :-) I love learning new words! Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This poem really appealed to me, particularly the last verse in which I thought the wording was most astute, Brooke. I like the Mirage form - very 'poetic.' Giddy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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This poem really appealed to me, particularly the last verse in which I thought the wording was most astute, Brooke. I like the Mirage form - very 'poetic.' Giddy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Giddy, thank you so much for your encouragement and for your wonderfully generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from arsinBW
Great poem, I truely enjoyed all the way through. All the rhyming was good and it just moved along so nicely. So great job.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Great poem, I truely enjoyed all the way through. All the rhyming was good and it just moved along so nicely. So great job.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Thank you, arsin, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Brooke, I like this so much: the hush of dawn so calm. But then the whole mirage poem stresses on this special moment when silence speaks so well about peace...:) Love this soothing poem so much. The repeating lines do their job well...:)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Hi, Brooke, I like this so much: the hush of dawn so calm. But then the whole mirage poem stresses on this special moment when silence speaks so well about peace...:) Love this soothing poem so much. The repeating lines do their job well...:)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Belinda, thank you so very much. I truly appreciate your generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from sunnilicious
I enjoyed the poem. It sounds good. Nice form. However, I did not understand this line, "silence forms a wordless psalm'. Because Psalms are personal belief or messages about God. How would it exist without words?
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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I enjoyed the poem. It sounds good. Nice form. However, I did not understand this line, "silence forms a wordless psalm'. Because Psalms are personal belief or messages about God. How would it exist without words?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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sunnilicious, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Brooke,
This is another beautiful poem so skillfully written. The story it tells is one of calming words and thoughts. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Brooke,
This is another beautiful poem so skillfully written. The story it tells is one of calming words and thoughts. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Curtis, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dustybones
Thanks to your thoughtfulness of word selection.
Often so true, a sharply, yet courtly HUSH is equal to the dawn's tender shyness as my star fades until twilight's surcease has found the sun's last song of day.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thanks to your thoughtfulness of word selection.
Often so true, a sharply, yet courtly HUSH is equal to the dawn's tender shyness as my star fades until twilight's surcease has found the sun's last song of day.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Dusty, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely peaceful read of the coming of dawn. Beautiful artwork and the black and white setting goes very well with this poem It is a lovely peaceful read and very much like the peace of watching dawn break or the sun set.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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This is a lovely peaceful read of the coming of dawn. Beautiful artwork and the black and white setting goes very well with this poem It is a lovely peaceful read and very much like the peace of watching dawn break or the sun set.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Pearl, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
"Nothing is so much like God as silence." I don't know who I quote, but I know it's true. Your lovely poem says much the same thing in your inimitable way.
As long as our brilliant innovators keep inventing new forms, you'll be there to bring them to full potential. What a wonderful combination. A mirage form. Wow! Brilliant.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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"Nothing is so much like God as silence." I don't know who I quote, but I know it's true. Your lovely poem says much the same thing in your inimitable way.
As long as our brilliant innovators keep inventing new forms, you'll be there to bring them to full potential. What a wonderful combination. A mirage form. Wow! Brilliant.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Adrienne, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
