No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
Another lovely addition to your Book of Sawyer!
For a long time now I have made it an evening effort to go outside and look up at the sky - regardless of the weather - just so I don't lose sight of the beauty and mystery of the night.
Children do it naturally and it is amazing to see their eyes widen and occasionally mouths drop open!
another very nice offering.. AT=/
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Another lovely addition to your Book of Sawyer!
For a long time now I have made it an evening effort to go outside and look up at the sky - regardless of the weather - just so I don't lose sight of the beauty and mystery of the night.
Children do it naturally and it is amazing to see their eyes widen and occasionally mouths drop open!
another very nice offering.. AT=/
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, AT, for your most thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
It's true, nobody knows till they open their eyes and heart using their imagination! Children are experts at this, as everything seems magical to them! I know Sawyer will love this poem, Brooke! Best wishes in the contest! Good rhymes and alliteration noted! Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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It's true, nobody knows till they open their eyes and heart using their imagination! Children are experts at this, as everything seems magical to them! I know Sawyer will love this poem, Brooke! Best wishes in the contest! Good rhymes and alliteration noted! Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Nadine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Great! It is much better to look up
than down all the time. This is a
good ABC poem with good rhyme..
That is a great picture. Well done.
Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Great! It is much better to look up
than down all the time. This is a
good ABC poem with good rhyme..
That is a great picture. Well done.
Nancy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Nancy :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
Hi Brooke, the mariposa puzzled me for a while, until the author notes! This is a gorgeous little delicacy! I don't think anyone does this type of imaginative thinking as well as you! You have produced a good one again! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke, the mariposa puzzled me for a while, until the author notes! This is a gorgeous little delicacy! I don't think anyone does this type of imaginative thinking as well as you! You have produced a good one again! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Roy - pretty soon Sawyer is going to have to give us all Spanish lessons LOL Brooke
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The wisdom of a child is unsurpassed! And that is why we enjoy them so much! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from krys123
Brooke, It's a coincidence that your writing this during a nearly full just been full Moon. "till they left their eyes to see" : This could be symbolically to totally transcending universal understanding to the universe around themselves. That is my interpretation. Thank you for sharing them posting this for everyone and may you find peace always wherever you go.
Alex
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Brooke, It's a coincidence that your writing this during a nearly full just been full Moon. "till they left their eyes to see" : This could be symbolically to totally transcending universal understanding to the universe around themselves. That is my interpretation. Thank you for sharing them posting this for everyone and may you find peace always wherever you go.
Alex
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Brooke how does your adult self see as a child does. I love your poems so they remind us of the wonder of a child...and Sawyer is learning all the while,..awesome job
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Brooke how does your adult self see as a child does. I love your poems so they remind us of the wonder of a child...and Sawyer is learning all the while,..awesome job
God bless
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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kiwijenny, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
Nothing can be as attractive as the power of a full moon, tugging at lover's hearts. The light kiss of the butterfly seals the transaction. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Note, I search all over, but I didn't see Sawyer. (LOL)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Nothing can be as attractive as the power of a full moon, tugging at lover's hearts. The light kiss of the butterfly seals the transaction. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Note, I search all over, but I didn't see Sawyer. (LOL)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Charlie - if Miranda ever sends a good shot of him looking up at butterflies, I'll change the picture :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Do you have PhotoShop?
Charlie
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Nope, I don't.
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What do you use to touch up your photos?
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Miranda is the one who posts the photos on facebook and then I just transfer them to here. I know she sometimes uses Instagram, which lets her do things like turn color photos into black and white
Comment from RYME4U
Very nicely done.The presentation is delightful. I love the references to Luna and Mariposa (They sound like baseball players eg...Mariposa hits a line drive to Luna on second base !!!Ha Ha)
No really, the poem is lovely. I enjoyed it so much. Butterflies and moonbeams - such a be4autiful combination!Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Very nicely done.The presentation is delightful. I love the references to Luna and Mariposa (They sound like baseball players eg...Mariposa hits a line drive to Luna on second base !!!Ha Ha)
No really, the poem is lovely. I enjoyed it so much. Butterflies and moonbeams - such a be4autiful combination!Great job!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so very much for the laugh and for the review :-) Brooke
Comment from Matoshka
How full of wonder your words are, my friend. Through the eyes of a child and their innocence, all things are possible and beautiful. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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How full of wonder your words are, my friend. Through the eyes of a child and their innocence, all things are possible and beautiful. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Matoshka, thank you so very much for your wonderfully gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome, and I am always amazed at what you write, so smoothly and full of life. Blessings
Comment from ennahanid
Short and very sweet and as always picture and color perfect to enhance your lovely words. I often wonder if there is any form that you are not comfortable with and I suppose I wonder because I am just not comfortable with any. Thank you for a pleasant read this afternoon - Dinah
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Short and very sweet and as always picture and color perfect to enhance your lovely words. I often wonder if there is any form that you are not comfortable with and I suppose I wonder because I am just not comfortable with any. Thank you for a pleasant read this afternoon - Dinah
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Dinah. There are a few forms I've never even tried because they just don't appeal to me, like the crown of sonnets and the cleave poem. Brooke
