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Not the Kipling poem...159 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
This is so cute. I love the way the kids drees up. I little ones are my favorite. Love your poem.And the colors and the picture are perfect.
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This is so cute. I love the way the kids drees up. I little ones are my favorite. Love your poem.And the colors and the picture are perfect.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from skip ward
This poem not only meets the contest requirements but is appropriate for the season. I especially like the imagery of the second stanza, where we see the "Jack O' Lantern's fiery grin/Through pumpkin skin". Starting each stanza with "If" provides unity. Well done. Good luck!
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This poem not only meets the contest requirements but is appropriate for the season. I especially like the imagery of the second stanza, where we see the "Jack O' Lantern's fiery grin/Through pumpkin skin". Starting each stanza with "If" provides unity. Well done. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the perceptive review. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your minuet poem is cleverly written with spooky-fun imagery painting a mental picture in the readers head. The art work is priceless. Your minuet is in splendid form with proper structure. You've written excellent rhymes to accommodate the structure of you poem. In your poem you had great word structure, very good alliteration and effective metaphor usage. I liked your second stanza the best: "If Jack o' Lantern's fiery grin Through pumpkin skin Lights up your eave, It's All Saints' Eve." I love your poem because it has the spirit of Halloween. I wish you good luck in the Minute Poetry writing prompt contest. I'd recommend your wicked cool poem to other reviewers. It was my pleasure to have reviewed your poem. Keep on writing with a very creative touch. Please have a happy Halloween and a fabulous day...Missy.
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Poet,
Your minuet poem is cleverly written with spooky-fun imagery painting a mental picture in the readers head. The art work is priceless. Your minuet is in splendid form with proper structure. You've written excellent rhymes to accommodate the structure of you poem. In your poem you had great word structure, very good alliteration and effective metaphor usage. I liked your second stanza the best: "If Jack o' Lantern's fiery grin Through pumpkin skin Lights up your eave, It's All Saints' Eve." I love your poem because it has the spirit of Halloween. I wish you good luck in the Minute Poetry writing prompt contest. I'd recommend your wicked cool poem to other reviewers. It was my pleasure to have reviewed your poem. Keep on writing with a very creative touch. Please have a happy Halloween and a fabulous day...Missy.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from rudion
Very clever and cute and well-written. Of course the picture is perfect too and really adds a nice dimension to the poem. All Saints Eve? Good point there.
Rudion
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Very clever and cute and well-written. Of course the picture is perfect too and really adds a nice dimension to the poem. All Saints Eve? Good point there.
Rudion
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from peggles
Well done
This is a lovely verse to read to children
even the big ones called adults
it made me smile
I enjoyed reading it very much
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Well done
This is a lovely verse to read to children
even the big ones called adults
it made me smile
I enjoyed reading it very much
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from Maustin
A cute, little tale you conjured up. Your rhyming pattern is upbeat. The artwork was very complimentary of your work. Just the right poem for this season.
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A cute, little tale you conjured up. Your rhyming pattern is upbeat. The artwork was very complimentary of your work. Just the right poem for this season.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
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Comment from teacherdub
Enjoyed this "treat". Well written minute poem utilizing Halloween without the gore and blood. Very concise as to pattern of assignment. Lines, syllables, etc. are correct. Love the pic, love the flow, and enjoyed the read. Good job. td
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Enjoyed this "treat". Well written minute poem utilizing Halloween without the gore and blood. Very concise as to pattern of assignment. Lines, syllables, etc. are correct. Love the pic, love the flow, and enjoyed the read. Good job. td
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from Betty517
This is so cute and adorable to read. It instantly takes you to Halloween night and the wee ones coming to the door trying to scare you! Great poem and good luck in the contest!
Betty
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This is so cute and adorable to read. It instantly takes you to Halloween night and the wee ones coming to the door trying to scare you! Great poem and good luck in the contest!
Betty
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
Comment from MelissaBickel
This is a fantastic entry into the contest. Your rhyme scheme just makes this read so flawlessly. I enjoyed this and it brought a huge grin to my face. The thought of excited little faces seeking their treats is enough to do that. :)
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This is a fantastic entry into the contest. Your rhyme scheme just makes this read so flawlessly. I enjoyed this and it brought a huge grin to my face. The thought of excited little faces seeking their treats is enough to do that. :)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
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it isn't mine either, but some of the stories are just fun to read.
Comment from jaded831
I love you minute poem, it is well written, and is true to form. I like the way you start with Halloween, then wind up with Halloween.
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I love you minute poem, it is well written, and is true to form. I like the way you start with Halloween, then wind up with Halloween.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
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Thank you. Halloween is not actually my tradition, but I just thought I'd join in the fun.
