A Stolen Kiss
triolet197 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, i just love the picture and the wording of your whimsical little triolet, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, i just love the picture and the wording of your whimsical little triolet, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much for your graciousness and generosity :-) Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
A lovely triolet written about the serious intention of capturing the heart of a love. The image shows innocence with the expressions on the faces. brilliant photo.
Well done. Mary
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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A lovely triolet written about the serious intention of capturing the heart of a love. The image shows innocence with the expressions on the faces. brilliant photo.
Well done. Mary
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from James Chaima Phiri
Watch out, you may be arrested for sexual harassment! First, I love the picture (photo) used. Secondly, I like the combination of terms. Instead of calling the one who stole a kiss as a thief, you call that person a poacher. You have clearly stated that it is not a crime if love is in the heart of the poacher. Which means without love in the heart it becomes a crime. This is a job well done.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Watch out, you may be arrested for sexual harassment! First, I love the picture (photo) used. Secondly, I like the combination of terms. Instead of calling the one who stole a kiss as a thief, you call that person a poacher. You have clearly stated that it is not a crime if love is in the heart of the poacher. Which means without love in the heart it becomes a crime. This is a job well done.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, James :-) Ah, it's a sad day when romance is criminalized :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
I love the poem. Its rhyme and rhythm is excellent. Eight beats to a line and the picture of two kids in a lovely kiss
is demonstrative of the poem's theme. Congratulations for a well written poem. Dom
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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I love the poem. Its rhyme and rhythm is excellent. Eight beats to a line and the picture of two kids in a lovely kiss
is demonstrative of the poem's theme. Congratulations for a well written poem. Dom
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Dom, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome, Brooke. Did you notice I enrolled in your course...? I'm not in a hurry, anyway. I'll perhaps be late but I will catch up.
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Yes, Dom - over the weekend I will be sending out notes asking people when they want the times for chats to be :-)
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, "A Stolen Kiss" is not a crime, is such a sweet poem. The photograph is amazing. These two little children are going to be friends forever. Chloe's parents are so lucky to have a nanny like Miranda. Chloe and Sawyer each have someone to play with. Chloe is able to experience the same play experiences that a family has, while Chloe's mother is working, which is so much better for Chloe than a Day Care Center. You and yours are a wonderful family. Carole
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Brooke, "A Stolen Kiss" is not a crime, is such a sweet poem. The photograph is amazing. These two little children are going to be friends forever. Chloe's parents are so lucky to have a nanny like Miranda. Chloe and Sawyer each have someone to play with. Chloe is able to experience the same play experiences that a family has, while Chloe's mother is working, which is so much better for Chloe than a Day Care Center. You and yours are a wonderful family. Carole
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Carole, thank you so much :-) Chloe is a play date, not the girl Miranda nannies. Miranda nannies Nora and Chloe has her own nanny LOL - it's hard to keep score sometimes. LOL Brooke
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Oh so cute. Now he has two girl friends forever.
Comment from madhatter1977
Cuckoo clocks and poached eggs, Brooke? Great poem - is it for the valentine contest. Good luck if so. Best wishes to you and your family as always, Pete
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Cuckoo clocks and poached eggs, Brooke? Great poem - is it for the valentine contest. Good luck if so. Best wishes to you and your family as always, Pete
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Pete, thank you. It's for the triolet contest :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
Just as I figured, the Cute Little One is growing up to be quite a heart breaker :) But who can resist him? Thank you for sharing another gem.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Just as I figured, the Cute Little One is growing up to be quite a heart breaker :) But who can resist him? Thank you for sharing another gem.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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CR, thanks so much :-) In all fairness to Chloe, Sawyer is crushing on her too. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from MissMerri
If we could give stars for the illustrations you use, I fear you'd get all my sixes. This one is at least a ten star photo, however. How cute!!! And how perfect for Valentine's Day. But the poem is first class as well. A perfect triolet with excellent rhymes and every line just right to tell the sweet story. I think I see a winner in the triolet contest. This is utterly charming and the picture too cute to ever forget.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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If we could give stars for the illustrations you use, I fear you'd get all my sixes. This one is at least a ten star photo, however. How cute!!! And how perfect for Valentine's Day. But the poem is first class as well. A perfect triolet with excellent rhymes and every line just right to tell the sweet story. I think I see a winner in the triolet contest. This is utterly charming and the picture too cute to ever forget.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Thank you so very much, Adonna :-) I keep telling Miranda how much people love her photos. I'm so proud of my little girl. Brooke
Comment from victor 66
This poem reminds me of my four year old grandson who was playing in a very large sandy area under playground equipment. This little girl with long curls hung upside down from the equipment looking at Owen and his little friends. Owen looked up at the little girl, and he said, "You're just beautiful." Owen didn't say this in any other way other than just with awe. I thought it was amazing. Thank you for the poem and the memory.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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This poem reminds me of my four year old grandson who was playing in a very large sandy area under playground equipment. This little girl with long curls hung upside down from the equipment looking at Owen and his little friends. Owen looked up at the little girl, and he said, "You're just beautiful." Owen didn't say this in any other way other than just with awe. I thought it was amazing. Thank you for the poem and the memory.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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victor, thank you so much for your thoughtful review and for sharing that adorable story :-) Brooke
Comment from FrannyG
This is gorgeous, Brooke, and a very fine triolet. As usual, very original, fresh and entertaining. Sawyer looks a bit non-plussed, but it's a gorgeous photo.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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This is gorgeous, Brooke, and a very fine triolet. As usual, very original, fresh and entertaining. Sawyer looks a bit non-plussed, but it's a gorgeous photo.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Franny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
