Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Dollie Mason
I liked this very much and enjoyed reading it. It is well written and has a message for all readers. I can see no negatives in it.It is great writing.
dm
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
I liked this very much and enjoyed reading it. It is well written and has a message for all readers. I can see no negatives in it.It is great writing.
dm
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Nathan and I send our heartfelt thanks for abeautiful review of this one.
Comment from FrankieW
I actually felt the characters dancing in a swirl of colors and true emotion above the lake. Heaven and earth blend as one. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
I actually felt the characters dancing in a swirl of colors and true emotion above the lake. Heaven and earth blend as one. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Oh thanks Frankie from Nathan and I for this beautiful review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
How cool this is. It leaves me thoroughly impressed. Not just one, but seven and I love how you interlinked them. Very enjoyable and of course, impressive too!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
How cool this is. It leaves me thoroughly impressed. Not just one, but seven and I love how you interlinked them. Very enjoyable and of course, impressive too!!! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks so very much Debbie from Nathan and I for a wonderful review of this one. We enjoyed your review tremendously.
Comment from wordsareus
This Crown of Sonnets is truly worthy of six stars. It is lovely and well written and sounds as though it could have been written by Shakespeare himself. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
This Crown of Sonnets is truly worthy of six stars. It is lovely and well written and sounds as though it could have been written by Shakespeare himself. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Wow thank you so much for this review Words. Nathan and I are thrilled. Sigh ...
Comment from Writingfundimension
Encore, Encore! With this fantastic set of sonnets you have shown what a marvelously talented poetess you are, G. And the collaboration with Nathan appears to be made in heaven. Wow! Never in my dreams could I write anything nearly as fine as this work of art. Congratulations you two! Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
Encore, Encore! With this fantastic set of sonnets you have shown what a marvelously talented poetess you are, G. And the collaboration with Nathan appears to be made in heaven. Wow! Never in my dreams could I write anything nearly as fine as this work of art. Congratulations you two! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks so very much Bev from both of us for a spectacular review. We had a ball writiing this one for sure.
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You're very welcome! Xx Bev
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Thanks so much Bev.
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My pleasure!
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Smie.
Comment from TDLRasmar
It was a very upbeat sonnet. I'm new to this site and really know very little about sonnets but I took my time reading it and it was easy to follow. I was attracted to your title because I wrote a short story some time back with the same name. There is just something about water and dreams that fit together very nicely. Also, nice job on your sonnets.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
It was a very upbeat sonnet. I'm new to this site and really know very little about sonnets but I took my time reading it and it was easy to follow. I was attracted to your title because I wrote a short story some time back with the same name. There is just something about water and dreams that fit together very nicely. Also, nice job on your sonnets.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Well welcome to this site TDL and we hope you love it here. Thank you se very much for a wonderful review of this one. Nice to know you took your time to read it.
Comment from Celestina Waters
Take my breath away and keep it in a vase! I eased into this piece like I would a warm pool. your words drifted as lyrics, each line making images clearer and crisp. I can read by your light hand that you are a dreamer, a believer in there soft space between this realm am others. If you are not you took me there. What a gift, how grateful I am you let me in.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
Take my breath away and keep it in a vase! I eased into this piece like I would a warm pool. your words drifted as lyrics, each line making images clearer and crisp. I can read by your light hand that you are a dreamer, a believer in there soft space between this realm am others. If you are not you took me there. What a gift, how grateful I am you let me in.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Oh thank you Celestina on behalf of Nathan an myself. It was a fun write to do and you might just say we are both dreamers.
Comment from diannen
I love fantasy, gentleness, love all rolled into one. This was a beautiful poem that wants one to join in. I loved the way you ended each verse, then started the next verse with that ending, clever. The picture holds all those words that you wrote. Magnificent, what more can one say.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
I love fantasy, gentleness, love all rolled into one. This was a beautiful poem that wants one to join in. I loved the way you ended each verse, then started the next verse with that ending, clever. The picture holds all those words that you wrote. Magnificent, what more can one say.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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From myself and Nathan, a huge thank you girl. Your review is awesome. Thank you very much.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Pam, That is simply wonderful! I bet no one dare give you a four star review! They gave me a hard time today for all kinds of reasons. I love sonnets. This is calssic. Thank you for sharing! I am going to bookmark it so I can get a better idea of a sonnet.Kudos Pam Kudos! Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
Pam, That is simply wonderful! I bet no one dare give you a four star review! They gave me a hard time today for all kinds of reasons. I love sonnets. This is calssic. Thank you for sharing! I am going to bookmark it so I can get a better idea of a sonnet.Kudos Pam Kudos! Nancy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Nancy from bath myself and Nathan. We thing you review is awesome.
Comment from rightforyou
WoW...what more can I say...Loved the way you wrote this awesome crown of sonnets...
I think that many have tried and only a few have completed such a display of talent....Cheers to my dear friend...
A sixer to help it shine...
Your friend Ron
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
WoW...what more can I say...Loved the way you wrote this awesome crown of sonnets...
I think that many have tried and only a few have completed such a display of talent....Cheers to my dear friend...
A sixer to help it shine...
Your friend Ron
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks from both Nathan and myself Ron for leaving us such a wonderful review. We enjoyed doing it.