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Comment from Charlie Crewes
Another sad example of our economy. You said it vey well. I wrote a story a short while back, called "My Hometown" about the chief source of work, a factory, closing up and 250 people losing their jobs. I thought your last lines were meaningful. We need to look at each of these shutdowns and feel for the people who lose their jobs due to our economy's downward spin. Well-done.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Another sad example of our economy. You said it vey well. I wrote a story a short while back, called "My Hometown" about the chief source of work, a factory, closing up and 250 people losing their jobs. I thought your last lines were meaningful. We need to look at each of these shutdowns and feel for the people who lose their jobs due to our economy's downward spin. Well-done.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Charlie, thank you - it does not surprise me, after reading your journal and the concern you show for former players that you would be someone who cares. Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
It is terrible what is happening around the world with these shops so many losing there jobs which leads to so much misery we just all have to hope that things return to some kind of normality soon well done regards Fuller
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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It is terrible what is happening around the world with these shops so many losing there jobs which leads to so much misery we just all have to hope that things return to some kind of normality soon well done regards Fuller
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Fuller, normalcy would be great right about now - thank you, Brooke
