Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a spiritually laden philosophical piece of poetic art! and a very fine one, i might add! life always follows death and vice versa.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thank you Rebekka, for the wonderful review.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

This is a beautiful entry into this Spiritual contest...I love the way the verses flow, and the example of the leaf is brilliant! Best of luck!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thank you Judy, I appreciate it!

reply by Irish Rain on 20-Oct-2014

you are welcome!

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

I'm not a religious person, but I liked this poem and how you presented it with good flowing phrases. Nothing really ends, but it portends a new beginning. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks John, for the great review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nice poem. We miss such beauty when we don;t take the time to look for the beauty in things around us. I love the idea that His love it always transcending and His desire is to live in and through us. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Pat

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks Pat for the encouraging review.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Spiritual writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest by poignantly incorporating the seasonal life cycle metaphor created and put into motion by the God of the Universe, Jehovah. Well done and all the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks Gracie for the well wishes and encouraging review.