When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke,
LOL. Great ending. I can see all that yellow color in your lawn. Did you see the movie, "Her?" Spike Jones did an excellent job of creating a sterile world by using subdued colors. No brightness there. Your poem also made me think of the book "The Giver."
Well written.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Dear Brooke,
LOL. Great ending. I can see all that yellow color in your lawn. Did you see the movie, "Her?" Spike Jones did an excellent job of creating a sterile world by using subdued colors. No brightness there. Your poem also made me think of the book "The Giver."
Well written.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Winslow, thank you so much :-) I don't think I saw that movie, but I have read that book :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
Well, Brooke, you've done it once more. Lovely little poem with perfect rhythm and rhymes. Nice picture to go with it, too. I enjoyed reading it. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Well, Brooke, you've done it once more. Lovely little poem with perfect rhythm and rhymes. Nice picture to go with it, too. I enjoyed reading it. Miss Sally
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
I always have a smile on my face when I come to the end of one of your charming poems, Brooke.
Of course, God visited your lawn ... with splotches of butter .. didn't he? :)
Have a beautiful weekend.
Love,
Sonali
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I always have a smile on my face when I come to the end of one of your charming poems, Brooke.
Of course, God visited your lawn ... with splotches of butter .. didn't he? :)
Have a beautiful weekend.
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from words
You wonderfully whimsical write had considerably brightened my day.
Thank you, Brooke.
Such a happy sentiment.
It being Friday, I have no sixes, but it on Sunday I will be reloaded and ready to light up your offerings.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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You wonderfully whimsical write had considerably brightened my day.
Thank you, Brooke.
Such a happy sentiment.
It being Friday, I have no sixes, but it on Sunday I will be reloaded and ready to light up your offerings.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, my friend - I really enjoyed writing this one and realized it would not be gathering in late week sixes :-) Brooke
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Beautiful images, Brooke. Especially the lady bug with the polkadot behind. :D The "do" in the penultimate line makes me stumble. Could just be me, though... :) Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Beautiful images, Brooke. Especially the lady bug with the polkadot behind. :D The "do" in the penultimate line makes me stumble. Could just be me, though... :) Nancy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Nancy - it is a do to make the statement emphatic :-) Brooke
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Hey, it's probably the benedryl. :D Nancy
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I think there is a poem in there - blame it on the bendryl, or maybe even a country song LOL
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Oh, definitely a song. We'll have to get Lee to write it. :D Nancy
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LOL
Comment from Oatmeal
adewpearl,
Your thoughts are well described. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. The rhyming is well done.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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adewpearl,
Your thoughts are well described. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. The rhyming is well done.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Oatmeal, thanks so much for your thoughtfulness :-) Brooke
Comment from mauial
This poem highlights and important point about our Creator. He wants us to enjoy life and so He gave us the five senses and seeing in color is one of them. Really seeing in color adds to the joy of life. Very uplifting poem and written without any forced rhyme.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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This poem highlights and important point about our Creator. He wants us to enjoy life and so He gave us the five senses and seeing in color is one of them. Really seeing in color adds to the joy of life. Very uplifting poem and written without any forced rhyme.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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mauial, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
It wouldn't surprise me a bit if He didn't have you in mind writing about all his colorful creations the day He created color. very well done, Buck
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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It wouldn't surprise me a bit if He didn't have you in mind writing about all his colorful creations the day He created color. very well done, Buck
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Buck, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
I'm so glad you included the color blue, my favorite color that gives me so much joy. Loved the Lady Bug art and the content of God's awesome coloring book...the earth.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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I'm so glad you included the color blue, my favorite color that gives me so much joy. Loved the Lady Bug art and the content of God's awesome coloring book...the earth.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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amahra, thank you so much - it is my favorite color too :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
He3 visited mine too...to my mother's dismay. Maybe that's why yellow has been one of my favorite colors since my childhood. Wonderful poem and you touched on everything that could possibly make my heart smile. I'd give you a 6 but the site won't let me.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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He3 visited mine too...to my mother's dismay. Maybe that's why yellow has been one of my favorite colors since my childhood. Wonderful poem and you touched on everything that could possibly make my heart smile. I'd give you a 6 but the site won't let me.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Valerie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
