The Magic Roundabout
more flower-inspired quatrains112 total reviews
Comment from Annelisa
This is a delightful poem. What wonderful fun in rhyming quatrains! The carousel artwork is perfect for this jolly romp. Well done! Annelisa
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2009
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This is a delightful poem. What wonderful fun in rhyming quatrains! The carousel artwork is perfect for this jolly romp. Well done! Annelisa
Comment Written 05-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2009
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Annelisa, the second I saw the flower name magic roundabout, I thought carousel - thanks so much for your lovely review. :-) Brooke
Comment from Amfunny
My friend is on a calliope kick? I like the way you used the phrase "magic roundabout" to describe the merry-go-round. Nicely done. Makes me want to go ride one now. :)
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2009
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My friend is on a calliope kick? I like the way you used the phrase "magic roundabout" to describe the merry-go-round. Nicely done. Makes me want to go ride one now. :)
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2009
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calliope was meant to be in this poem, which was not working out yesterday, so I gave it its own whole poem yesterday - today it is a supporting character LOL Thanks so much, my friend. Brooke :-)
