Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello adewpearl, Brooke, I enjoyed reading your poem and each line pulled me quickly into the next line. Of special note:

scratching of claws,
feasting of fangs,
buckets of blood,
panicking pangs,

(As I read the above, I wondered "who" could be this be, but I was so relieved to read:

ghouls on the loose --
Halloween night.

... 'cause I thought some of my long-lost relatives had surfaced again. Whew- what a relief! Lol.)

A fun poem that made me smile. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Very expressing poem , starting with the drawing of Sawyer, interesting how big he draw himself with the very sad face... Perfect Hallowing
poem , great alliteration and scary imagery... Pili

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from Honeysuckle1876

Excellent

This is a great Halloween poem. I loved your use of alliteration. It adds more to the cadence of your words. Rhyming was perfect. A great description of Halloween. I enjoyed reading it.

Great job
Angie

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi...I was almost scared off by the title..so many sad poems on this site. But, as always I was a happy gal to read your poem...what a wonderful bunch of images and memeories.
padumachitta

(We just put an offer in on a house...OMG...I am equal parts scared and excited...we sign final papers in a month. It takes that long to get a Notary appointment.)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

A fitting lesson in the art of alliteration that really plungers into the celebration of Halloween. No word seems to be wasted. It reads like a drum beat. Nice work -Ekim777

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Excellent rhythmic description of Halloween night! Delightful to read these smooth and even lines of verse.Very nostalgic, brings back may memories. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

No moaning of men and bawling of broads or jabbering of jerks? No, that's a proper length. All I'll get is wailing of wind and lisping of leaves this far out in the boonies.
Excellent alliteration.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Brooke - A great Halloween poem with a host of alliteration - too many to mention - possibly I like 'panicking pangs' - try saying it fast over and over - a good tongue twister. Fun read. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This made me happier than a pig up to his snout in slop LOL. I love the imagery and you even make 'buckets of blood' fun in the way you weave the scene. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me. Happy Halloween!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

At least the Bed lives on. Sawyer left his gun at home. This is very well written. As usual your poem is very cute (but Sawyer is cuter.) Good time.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014