Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

I like your Valentine poem.
The song is in your heart but it needs a partner to help make it complete. Nice rhyme scheme and alliteration of S's and D's. Good job and good luck! 8-)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from CowboyToo

Excellent

Really nice. You didn't skip a beat. The poem rolls along making its own music and offering such a warm invitation.
We need more of these.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Cowboy Too, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I wish I had a six, love this poem so much, very meaningful , great originality and imagery. The picture of Nora and Sawyer is another treasure. Thank you for sharing. Pili

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Pili :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 23-Jan-2014

You are very welcome Brooke. Pili

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

I think these two really enjoy each other's company. They're always doing things together. Keeps Sawyer from growing up alone. Your Valentine's entry is superb. The quatrains tell a good story of how two should be together. Well penned. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Jada. Yep, they were meant for each other :-) Brooke

Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

All songs are composed for two, that's the way it should be, methinks. Songs for one are so lonely. Although I do seem to be exceptionally good at penning that kind. Love your light-hearted work.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

JoLynn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke, this was a lovely work that just rolled off the tongue when read.
Also loved the message - great and powerful - the way it should always be.
Skilled write as alway, a wonderful submission for the contest, good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Maureen, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Gladness

Excellent

Your poems are always a delight to read, and this "Valentine Duet" shows your quality writing. Only the Valentine's added notes complete the creation, so true for the song of life. Well done, my friend, Anita

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Anita, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Marillion

Excellent

Beautiful said OR sung, Brooke, and I like the analogy of a duet being so much richer and full than a solo artist performance.

One possible suggestion: create a sound that's hollow. (would "too" work better than "that's") Not much difference between the two, really.

Nicely done!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you, Dave - I will reread that line :-) Brooke

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

Brooke,
And he looks like he is such a big help. LOL Whole hand on the keys. Definitely need two for a duet. Nicely done. Made me smiggle.
Love,
Barbara

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by babylonia on 27-Jan-2014

Brooke,
You are very welcome. Hope you are doing well today.
Love,
Barbara

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Cute picture. I'm guessing that Nara is taking piano lessons. What a beautiful piano to be able to practice on. Sawyer looks like he's having fun. Cute Valentine poem. You wow us again:)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Yep, she started taking piano lessons a couple months ago. Her grandpa is a famous composer and music producer - even wrote a hit for Michael Jackson, so music is in her stars :-) Thanks so much, Joy. Brooke