Singing for Heavenly Boarding
Suffering is Singing for a Heavenly Boarding -- Alliterative114 total reviews
Comment from gaangel62
What a great poem, I have never seen a poem like this and it was a joy to read. Thanks so much for sharing this poem...Angie
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What a great poem, I have never seen a poem like this and it was a joy to read. Thanks so much for sharing this poem...Angie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from Rondeno
This is a very clever piece of wordsmithery, with the overall acrostic, as well as rhyme, alliteration and a multitude of -ing verbs, giving energy to the whole.
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This is a very clever piece of wordsmithery, with the overall acrostic, as well as rhyme, alliteration and a multitude of -ing verbs, giving energy to the whole.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from Alankrita
that is one amaziing poem! the way the first words of the whole poem spelt out the first sentence... it is awe-inspiring. it couldn't have been easy, yet it seemed almost effortless on your part, the flow was so good. wonderful job!
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that is one amaziing poem! the way the first words of the whole poem spelt out the first sentence... it is awe-inspiring. it couldn't have been easy, yet it seemed almost effortless on your part, the flow was so good. wonderful job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from tbacha58
This poem is so beautiful, so deep, so enjoyable to read, advices in a poem which are so true to do , thanking God for everything we have in the now. I enjoyed it so mush, and I am so happy offering you a six star well deserved. Bless u Terry
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This poem is so beautiful, so deep, so enjoyable to read, advices in a poem which are so true to do , thanking God for everything we have in the now. I enjoyed it so mush, and I am so happy offering you a six star well deserved. Bless u Terry
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from Artasylum
this is very well written and it has many, many very thought provoking points... It is definitely something that needs to be considered in bites there are so many ways of approaching Suffering, Examining In Living Singing Swinging A Heavenly Boarding.
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this is very well written and it has many, many very thought provoking points... It is definitely something that needs to be considered in bites there are so many ways of approaching Suffering, Examining In Living Singing Swinging A Heavenly Boarding.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from emjaihammond
Within all of this lovely poem I really believe the last lines are touching.
In the race ofgoing back to Him and retiring
No cause of suffering living abode in immortal boarding
Go and get going for the boarding, you're on His Watching! A message worth hearing. Enjoyed! (Sorry my typing is all over the place.)
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Within all of this lovely poem I really believe the last lines are touching.
In the race ofgoing back to Him and retiring
No cause of suffering living abode in immortal boarding
Go and get going for the boarding, you're on His Watching! A message worth hearing. Enjoyed! (Sorry my typing is all over the place.)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This acrostic poetry is well thought-out and very well written. It held my amazement and interest from start
to finish. No photo is necessary; your words are ample.
Thank You for your creation.
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This acrostic poetry is well thought-out and very well written. It held my amazement and interest from start
to finish. No photo is necessary; your words are ample.
Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from jjstar
Wow, this was a doozy (a great doozy) of an acrostic. I feel like I went to church this morning. You have some bright, but kind of soothing language. While the poem hit me as bold, I feel like it's not exactly the right adjective to use, because while it's bold in what it stands for, it was kind of melodic. Okay, I'll quit before I get more confused.
Great job!
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Wow, this was a doozy (a great doozy) of an acrostic. I feel like I went to church this morning. You have some bright, but kind of soothing language. While the poem hit me as bold, I feel like it's not exactly the right adjective to use, because while it's bold in what it stands for, it was kind of melodic. Okay, I'll quit before I get more confused.
Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from Dean Kuch
2 Timothy 2:3-5 "Endure suffering along with me, as a good soldier of Christ Jesus. Soldiers don't get tied up in the affairs of civilian life, for then they cannot please the officer who enlisted them. And athletes cannot win the prize unless they follow the rules."
Matthew 5:11-12 "God blesses you when people mock you and persecute you and lie about you and say all sorts of evil things against you because you are my followers. Be happy about it! Be very glad! For a great reward awaits you in heaven. And remember, the ancient prophets were persecuted in the same way."
1 Peter 5:9 Stand up to him. Stand firm in what you believe. All over the world you know that your brothers and sisters are going through the same kind of suffering."
Romans 8:18 "For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to be compared with the glory which shall be revealed in us."
The Bible says it, just as your masterful, unique and well presented and written poem states, over and over again. We must, indeed, suffer as our voices are singing, for a Heavenly boarding, a mansion in His glorious Kingdom...
Well done. VERY well done!
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2 Timothy 2:3-5 "Endure suffering along with me, as a good soldier of Christ Jesus. Soldiers don't get tied up in the affairs of civilian life, for then they cannot please the officer who enlisted them. And athletes cannot win the prize unless they follow the rules."
Matthew 5:11-12 "God blesses you when people mock you and persecute you and lie about you and say all sorts of evil things against you because you are my followers. Be happy about it! Be very glad! For a great reward awaits you in heaven. And remember, the ancient prophets were persecuted in the same way."
1 Peter 5:9 Stand up to him. Stand firm in what you believe. All over the world you know that your brothers and sisters are going through the same kind of suffering."
Romans 8:18 "For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to be compared with the glory which shall be revealed in us."
The Bible says it, just as your masterful, unique and well presented and written poem states, over and over again. We must, indeed, suffer as our voices are singing, for a Heavenly boarding, a mansion in His glorious Kingdom...
Well done. VERY well done!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
Comment from ravenblack
I was able to follow most of this one- much more focused than some of your previous posts. Just you take too many liberties with language that render some passages nonsensical. What is a heavenly boarding? Waterboarding? Being paddled? Or do you mean boarding as in room and board. Xerophytic- huh? Not in any dictionary I own. Mort- short for mortgage? Mortality? And suffering is not singing for children who have no choice but to starve.
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I was able to follow most of this one- much more focused than some of your previous posts. Just you take too many liberties with language that render some passages nonsensical. What is a heavenly boarding? Waterboarding? Being paddled? Or do you mean boarding as in room and board. Xerophytic- huh? Not in any dictionary I own. Mort- short for mortgage? Mortality? And suffering is not singing for children who have no choice but to starve.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
