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Thank Heaven

Wait! A wee wee light is noo cummin' oan.

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Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the writer does a good job of not forcing the rhymes. The photo is beautiful as the writer does a good job of holding the readers attention from beginning to end.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is very well written and presented my friend I liked the language used as beautiful poem indeed well done regards I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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This is wonderful! I listened and followed along. I love the Scottish vernacular you used... sounds great!

One error to fix:

Oan a fluer wae aw [it's] colours bright.
Oan a fluer wae aw its colours bright.

Remember the difference:

IT'S = IT IS
ITS = belongs to IT

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

Comment from Darkhorse555
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from a beautiful pink rose showing the softness that lies with this piece from your clumsy heart jumping a beat a very enjoyable and beautiful piece

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

Comment from kiwijenny
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I love the Scottish vernacular. My son lived in East Kilbride and they had a wee bairn there. So it's a Brau Brecht moon licht nicht ye ken. I don't think that's right but I love it.

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013