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Comment from Jarlsbane
What a simple yet deeply meaningful promise of love... what more could a man ask? except maybe a clean house, hot meals, and lots of sex! I know I know... shut up jarls! I am not meaning to trivialize this marvelous poem I think it is grand! As always! Miss ya! -Michael
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What a simple yet deeply meaningful promise of love... what more could a man ask? except maybe a clean house, hot meals, and lots of sex! I know I know... shut up jarls! I am not meaning to trivialize this marvelous poem I think it is grand! As always! Miss ya! -Michael
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Michael, you want hot meals and hot sex??? Hell, if I'm going to take cooking lessons I'm NOT going to have time to vacuum, too. You have me sitting here shaking with laughter. :-) Thank you, dear friend. Brooke :-)
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This is exactly why I think a man should have three wives, one to cook, one to clean and one to... ah well you get my point. And duties could change day to day that way it's fair for all.
Comment from MariJo
Another beautiful poem well written with so much feeling & imagery. I like the warmth you have conveyed with "the softest quilt". I have made many & can relate to this. I will add it to my favorites that you have shared.
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Another beautiful poem well written with so much feeling & imagery. I like the warmth you have conveyed with "the softest quilt". I have made many & can relate to this. I will add it to my favorites that you have shared.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you, MariJo. I'm so glad you could relate to this and truly appreciate your most generous response to it :-) Brooke
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Beautiful flowing metered work. Nice little form and such a lovely voice that sings the song. You do have a lovely poetic voice, my dear, always a pleasure to read.
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Beautiful flowing metered work. Nice little form and such a lovely voice that sings the song. You do have a lovely poetic voice, my dear, always a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you, Jo Lynn. It is always a pleasure to hear from you, too! Brooke :-)
Comment from fictionwriter
I really loved this poem. It's so sweet and caring. I love the enfolding of the heart to keep it warm. It was a wonderful picture in my mind. Great job.
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I really loved this poem. It's so sweet and caring. I love the enfolding of the heart to keep it warm. It was a wonderful picture in my mind. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you, Joy. I'm so glad this love poem appeals to you. I just finished reading about Kat's escape - you've given me a generous review and a dramatic story to get my blood pumping! Brooke :-)
Comment from Begin Again
Brooke
The love in every single word you wrote touched my heart and I hope many others...This is the best!
For the New Year, I hope to be able to learn from you and the other poets and in some small way offer a bit of myself through poetry. You are outstanding and so is your talent...
Hugs and smiles, my friend
Carol
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Brooke
The love in every single word you wrote touched my heart and I hope many others...This is the best!
For the New Year, I hope to be able to learn from you and the other poets and in some small way offer a bit of myself through poetry. You are outstanding and so is your talent...
Hugs and smiles, my friend
Carol
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you so much, Carol :-) What a lovely and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from words
Oh, this is delightful.
As I read it, I could hear it sung in my ear.
Wish I were a musician, I would immediately set it to music.
Love the closing:
I simply promise I'll enfold
your heart in mine against the cold.
Such a delightful love verse.
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Oh, this is delightful.
As I read it, I could hear it sung in my ear.
Wish I were a musician, I would immediately set it to music.
Love the closing:
I simply promise I'll enfold
your heart in mine against the cold.
Such a delightful love verse.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you, my friend - I'm so glad this sounds musical to you :-) Brooke
Comment from missy98writer
Brooke,
Oh My God, your poem is exceptional and well executed. A six star romantic rispetto. I read it aloud to my family they loved it. This poem "Were I a Seamstress" gets my "freaking awesome" award. So romantic and the rhymes are perfection. The imagery was fantastic. I love the line:
'I simply promise I'll enfold
your heart in mine against the cold. '
I use my two sixes, but I'll try to remember to update this to a six on Sunday when we get 2 sixes.
Melissa.
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Brooke,
Oh My God, your poem is exceptional and well executed. A six star romantic rispetto. I read it aloud to my family they loved it. This poem "Were I a Seamstress" gets my "freaking awesome" award. So romantic and the rhymes are perfection. The imagery was fantastic. I love the line:
'I simply promise I'll enfold
your heart in mine against the cold. '
I use my two sixes, but I'll try to remember to update this to a six on Sunday when we get 2 sixes.
Melissa.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you so very very much, Melissa - I am bowled over by your enthusiastic response to this poem and your generosity! Your comments are much appreciated :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
Brooke,
This is a very romantic poem! I love the final offering of your heart to the one you love. The gift you offer is the most valuable and meaningful.
Great style of writing with depth and affection woven in like a true seamstress. The soft photo adds so much to the overall mood and presentation! Good choice!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Brooke,
This is a very romantic poem! I love the final offering of your heart to the one you love. The gift you offer is the most valuable and meaningful.
Great style of writing with depth and affection woven in like a true seamstress. The soft photo adds so much to the overall mood and presentation! Good choice!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thanks so much, Nadine. I so appreciate your kind comments about the poem and its presentation :-) Brooke
Comment from nora arjuna
you are truly great and you are number one. what a wonderful read. what i like about most of your poem is that they aren't lengthy. to me, and my short span mind (where poetry is concerned) a lengthy poem tends to lose its effect or main point. that's of course just about my personal experience since i'm not much of a poet. enjoyed this. :)
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you are truly great and you are number one. what a wonderful read. what i like about most of your poem is that they aren't lengthy. to me, and my short span mind (where poetry is concerned) a lengthy poem tends to lose its effect or main point. that's of course just about my personal experience since i'm not much of a poet. enjoyed this. :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Nora, thank you - I must admit the long poems usually start to lose me too unless they're really cool story poems. It's like - how many blasted verses can someone use to describe one rose? LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from DeboraDyess
One of the best love poems I've ever read -- anywhere. This strikes such a chord with my heart. Such a beauty -- try to publish, okay? Deb
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One of the best love poems I've ever read -- anywhere. This strikes such a chord with my heart. Such a beauty -- try to publish, okay? Deb
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you, so much, Deb - publishing is my goal for 2010 :-) You are most generous and most encouraging. Brooke
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Excellent! I'ts my goal also. Been published before, but just little stuff. So it's The Year of The Book! :) Deb
