The Ottava Rima
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Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Very nice job on that. You know one runs out of words to say to you when it comes to this form, you have really found your niche that's for sure. Beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Very nice job on that. You know one runs out of words to say to you when it comes to this form, you have really found your niche that's for sure. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Jo Lynn. Who better to like a poem about dawn? LOL Smiling in your direction :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Another beautifully evocative word picture of the dawn and our welcome of a new day. This scans and flows easily and calls up the imagery of the light stealing across the sky and those first waking moments. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Another beautifully evocative word picture of the dawn and our welcome of a new day. This scans and flows easily and calls up the imagery of the light stealing across the sky and those first waking moments. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Patrick. So glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
Comment from lola29
Brooke, this poem is wonderful. There is something so magical about the morning light that offers rejuvination and strength from fear as you have so elegantly stated.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Brooke, this poem is wonderful. There is something so magical about the morning light that offers rejuvination and strength from fear as you have so elegantly stated.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Lola. I appreciate your gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from rama devi
Hello Brooke
Nice tone and pace to suite the tenor of your theme. Lovely presentation with artowrk and color choices. This is serene, well rhymed and timed (of course) and a pleasant read.
No nits.
HUGS,
rd
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Hello Brooke
Nice tone and pace to suite the tenor of your theme. Lovely presentation with artowrk and color choices. This is serene, well rhymed and timed (of course) and a pleasant read.
No nits.
HUGS,
rd
Comment Written 23-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Thank you, rama devi :-) Glad you liked this upbeat poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Annmuma
I like everything about this poem, from picture through words -- BUT what I like most is the title. WONDER. It just caught my eye immediately and reminded me that we should be more time in a state of Wonder. Thanks. ann
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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I like everything about this poem, from picture through words -- BUT what I like most is the title. WONDER. It just caught my eye immediately and reminded me that we should be more time in a state of Wonder. Thanks. ann
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Ann - you are most kind - I actually had someone dock me a star because of the use of Wonder in the title LOL.
Brooke :-)
