Freedom
A humorous septolet104 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Yuck - I used to have to
chop up fallen apples for
wine-making back in the
old days - now we just buy
it ready-made from the shelf.
A good piece, Brooke -- I could
see the worm.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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Yuck - I used to have to
chop up fallen apples for
wine-making back in the
old days - now we just buy
it ready-made from the shelf.
A good piece, Brooke -- I could
see the worm.
Margaret.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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Margaret - thank you for the yuck as that is what I was going for! LOL Brooke :-)
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We;ve a spacious bathroom which
has a walk-in airing cupboard....
I used to stand the fementing apples
etc in there - what a smell - I had
to warn my visitors it was only the
wine -- needless to say they used
to stay in there sniffing it.. ha!
M
Comment from Mike K2
I enjoyed this well written poem and it is obvious that you have better luck then me. It is always a half a worm.
I like it! The illustration, poem and layout combine well to make a nice poem that most can identify with and also get a little laugh.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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I enjoyed this well written poem and it is obvious that you have better luck then me. It is always a half a worm.
I like it! The illustration, poem and layout combine well to make a nice poem that most can identify with and also get a little laugh.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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I came really close to biting into a worm in a chocolate covered strawberry at one of my church functions - yuck! what a thought. Thanks, Mike. Brooke :-)
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Dit dent dent dida dent... Tequila!
Comment from Deejharrington
Ugh! Yuck! I just love a little meat with my fruit! I think that I'll cut up my apples to eat them from now on!
After reading about your "trip to Ireland", I think you're being way too nice! I know you have a sense of humor, but what about paybacks? I warned him to watch out!
deb
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Ugh! Yuck! I just love a little meat with my fruit! I think that I'll cut up my apples to eat them from now on!
After reading about your "trip to Ireland", I think you're being way too nice! I know you have a sense of humor, but what about paybacks? I warned him to watch out!
deb
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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Deb, thank you! I loved the stories that had me in them - but they sure let me know, along with Nescher's comment to me today, that people are getting this way too deep picture of all the reflecting I do! LOL Brooke :-)
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You're welcome
deb
Comment from sgalletti
Fun! Hope the worm got truly liberated and didn't end in you rmouth :) lol. I'm heading off to Vegas for four days with hubby to play some golf. So, I'll be off FS for a while and will catch up when I return on Friday. In the meantime, this was a fun one to send me on my way....Sue
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Fun! Hope the worm got truly liberated and didn't end in you rmouth :) lol. I'm heading off to Vegas for four days with hubby to play some golf. So, I'll be off FS for a while and will catch up when I return on Friday. In the meantime, this was a fun one to send me on my way....Sue
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2009
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Sue, thank you for my first review on this silly piece - have fun golfing - I find it close to miraculous that people get that ball into that tiny hole. LOL Brooke :-)
