Lullaby
An offer of comfort for any who feel in need107 total reviews
Comment from Curt Mongold
You know I love the traditional themes and styles, and this is no exception. You have a way of capturing the moment, the essence of a thought and making it into a beautiful verse with such flow and rhyme!
You are rapipdly becoming one of my favorites!
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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You know I love the traditional themes and styles, and this is no exception. You have a way of capturing the moment, the essence of a thought and making it into a beautiful verse with such flow and rhyme!
You are rapipdly becoming one of my favorites!
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Curt, that is a most lovely thing to say. Thank you. Your ver b thingy style is so contemporary and jazzy and I love it so much, but my words always want to come out smooth. I'm glad you like it when they do. Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is just lovely, the words
flowing smoothly, so soothing,
with great rhythm and rhyme..
complemented with such a beautiful
picture - relaxed me completely.
I thoroughly enjoyed the read,
Margaret.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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This is just lovely, the words
flowing smoothly, so soothing,
with great rhythm and rhyme..
complemented with such a beautiful
picture - relaxed me completely.
I thoroughly enjoyed the read,
Margaret.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Margaret, thanks so much - I tried many keywords before finding a good picture - glad you found it soothing as that was the goal! Brooke
Comment from Nanny 6
This lulliby soothes the soul and calms the mind as the words sink into my heart. An inspiring piece that eases the pain and lonliness in the reader. Another great piece, Brooke. Judy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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This lulliby soothes the soul and calms the mind as the words sink into my heart. An inspiring piece that eases the pain and lonliness in the reader. Another great piece, Brooke. Judy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Judy, what thoughtful comments -thank you so much. Brooke
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Brooke, this is too beautiful to express in words! The wonderful sentimentatility of it....and, the kindness is so touching. Loved the rhythm, rhyme and flow of the piece. This is so flawlessly done. Very good job. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Brooke, this is too beautiful to express in words! The wonderful sentimentatility of it....and, the kindness is so touching. Loved the rhythm, rhyme and flow of the piece. This is so flawlessly done. Very good job. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Susanne, those are most lovely things to say. Thank you! Brooke
Comment from debskatz
Hi Brooke,
Such a beautiful poem. Having just written & posted the poem that I have, just makes this one all that much more beautiful, yet so unattainable.
Anyway, as always it's beautifully written in every way.
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Hi Brooke,
Such a beautiful poem. Having just written & posted the poem that I have, just makes this one all that much more beautiful, yet so unattainable.
Anyway, as always it's beautifully written in every way.
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Deb, now you've made me curious to go see your pathetic little offering. LOL I'm sure it is fantastic and will take a look in a couple of minutes. :-) You are most kind. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from E. W. Crowe
Very pretty and very romantic, brooke. A lullaby for a maturer audience, and it works. I would come to whoever spoke these words. Think I slide it to my wife.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Very pretty and very romantic, brooke. A lullaby for a maturer audience, and it works. I would come to whoever spoke these words. Think I slide it to my wife.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Hey, you are more than welcome to use it on your wife! :-)
Thanks so very much, Brooke
Comment from MumEsGirl
Lovely poem here, an adult lullaby or a wish to save our loved ones from the world as it is now.
I think I must be getting old though, finding the yellow on blue a little difficult - now where did I put my walking stick
best wishes
kate
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Lovely poem here, an adult lullaby or a wish to save our loved ones from the world as it is now.
I think I must be getting old though, finding the yellow on blue a little difficult - now where did I put my walking stick
best wishes
kate
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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oh, I'll change the color - I try to get them right, but sometimes I hit the ones the grannies just can't see. LOLOL
thanks ever so much - this is my first review for this poem,
Brooke
