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Comment from Carolann Renaud
First I want to say I am also a believer and it is obvious that You are too! So first I thank you for being faithful to write about your faith. a topic that is often avoided by writers for fear that many would eighter not judge it or may be offended by it. My critique involves certain lines.
In this line, I stumbled over "hundred days"
Only for saving my life before ending hundred bad days. If you check grammar and punctuation I think you might have said one hundred or a hundred for a better flow.
Also in the next line-Nothing, I do remember of those severe painful days. It was choppy as I read and had to re-read. I think if you removed the word do it would flow much easier. That's about it! It's all Grace
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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First I want to say I am also a believer and it is obvious that You are too! So first I thank you for being faithful to write about your faith. a topic that is often avoided by writers for fear that many would eighter not judge it or may be offended by it. My critique involves certain lines.
In this line, I stumbled over "hundred days"
Only for saving my life before ending hundred bad days. If you check grammar and punctuation I think you might have said one hundred or a hundred for a better flow.
Also in the next line-Nothing, I do remember of those severe painful days. It was choppy as I read and had to re-read. I think if you removed the word do it would flow much easier. That's about it! It's all Grace
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you for giving me a good suggestion.
Please read and find how I have edited the lines.
Thanking you in advance,
Wishing you every success in your chosen goal in writing,
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from Earl Corp
It's too bad I've used all my six star ratings for the week, this poem would have earned it. I can understand your point, God also brought me through a catastrophic illness, twice. I like the acrostic element to your poem.
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It's too bad I've used all my six star ratings for the week, this poem would have earned it. I can understand your point, God also brought me through a catastrophic illness, twice. I like the acrostic element to your poem.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual acrostic poem, GOD THANK YOU AGAIN, follows the theme and seems to indicate a dodging of surgery through the miracle of pharmaceuticals. Neat
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This spiritual acrostic poem, GOD THANK YOU AGAIN, follows the theme and seems to indicate a dodging of surgery through the miracle of pharmaceuticals. Neat
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Well, I'm glad to hear you were helped without surgery. Surgery is so hard on you - for years after I think. And God is our healer. A good thankful poem - thanks to God
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Well, I'm glad to hear you were helped without surgery. Surgery is so hard on you - for years after I think. And God is our healer. A good thankful poem - thanks to God
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very heart felt poem thanking our God for what He has done for you. I can totally relate to this also. He brought me back from death, hell and the grave. I thank Him always also. May God bless you my friend! Teri
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This is a very well written and very heart felt poem thanking our God for what He has done for you. I can totally relate to this also. He brought me back from death, hell and the grave. I thank Him always also. May God bless you my friend! Teri
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This poem show how strong your faith in God has become since He stepped into your life and guided you back to health and happiness. It is a wondrous feeling to know you have Him at your side. I enjoyed reading your acrostic. Well done. :) Sandra xx
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This poem show how strong your faith in God has become since He stepped into your life and guided you back to health and happiness. It is a wondrous feeling to know you have Him at your side. I enjoyed reading your acrostic. Well done. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
It is wonderful to give thanks to God for helping you through so many storms in lie
Thank you for sharing
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
It is wonderful to give thanks to God for helping you through so many storms in lie
Thank you for sharing
cookie
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
