Free Verse Collection
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Comment from emrpoems
I think your poem does have a good rhythm and does not need any punctuation to read better. They say happy people sing and dance spontaneously .. Proves that even in trying times there is some soul left
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I think your poem does have a good rhythm and does not need any punctuation to read better. They say happy people sing and dance spontaneously .. Proves that even in trying times there is some soul left
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, EMR, and for your lovely review and kind words. I am delighted that my poem gave you a moment or two of pleasure!
Comment from Darkhorse555
such an amazingly beautiful picture in words Then they swirled and they glided And they gracefully subsided In torrents of clear laughter From their hearts excellently crafted piece
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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such an amazingly beautiful picture in words Then they swirled and they glided And they gracefully subsided In torrents of clear laughter From their hearts excellently crafted piece
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you. Dark Horse, for another kind review. I am delighted that my poem gave you pleasure.
