Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "My Better Place"...musings on us
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Comment from mchapman
Such compassion is shown in your writing. Emotionally wonderful story line and loved your authors notes great read....mary
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Such compassion is shown in your writing. Emotionally wonderful story line and loved your authors notes great read....mary
Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind and generous review. The compliment that you gave about the compassion shown in my writing is one I will treasure. Blessings to you and yours.
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you are welcome
Comment from dlynne
So nice, I loved the first line, it was so right with the picture. Short and to the point, well done. I bet your husband loved this also.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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So nice, I loved the first line, it was so right with the picture. Short and to the point, well done. I bet your husband loved this also.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind and generous review. My husband loves this poem, and he's not all that into poetry! LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from FredCollingwood
Twenty seven years. Woo-hoo! That's awesome. Everyone who has been together that long had been thouugh and overcome much. I applaud you.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Twenty seven years. Woo-hoo! That's awesome. Everyone who has been together that long had been thouugh and overcome much. I applaud you.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your Woo-hoo. Almost all of the couples that got married around the same time as us - have split up. Our children brag to their friends that we are still together; I'm just happy to still be with the best friend I've ever had! THANKS for reading, and for your generous review.
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I'm coming up on 37 years. My family feels the same.
Comment from Faiths Dream
Very inspiring. With the love shown in this poem, a unity is formed. Being married for over 32 years, I know exactly what you mean. A better place of being as one. Great message, I especially like the last verse,"Has set my heart, my soul, and my spirit, free." What comfort!
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Very inspiring. With the love shown in this poem, a unity is formed. Being married for over 32 years, I know exactly what you mean. A better place of being as one. Great message, I especially like the last verse,"Has set my heart, my soul, and my spirit, free." What comfort!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate your feedback.
