A Mom Moment
just feeling sentimental96 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Nice lines celebrating the union that exists between a mother and her child, a bond that is very strong. Nice lines and a nice tribute to you both.
Patrick
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Hi Brooke,
Nice lines celebrating the union that exists between a mother and her child, a bond that is very strong. Nice lines and a nice tribute to you both.
Patrick
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
Comment from BarnCat
Brooke, this is splendid. Having a son of my own, I can totally relate to this perfectly constructed poem. As mother's we ahve to understand (as your poem points out) that we have to let our children go in order for them to return. I love your closing line it is a combination of love and respect. Nice write. deb
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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Brooke, this is splendid. Having a son of my own, I can totally relate to this perfectly constructed poem. As mother's we ahve to understand (as your poem points out) that we have to let our children go in order for them to return. I love your closing line it is a combination of love and respect. Nice write. deb
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Deb. I just had the nicest phone conversation with my 30 year old baby boy. I still wish I could hug him good night at the end of each day. LOL Brooke
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I'm with you on that hugging thng, Brooke!
Comment from WRITER1
This has a very good flow and I liked the way it read. Isn't it wonderful how a mother thinks about her child, even when they are grown they are still our babies.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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This has a very good flow and I liked the way it read. Isn't it wonderful how a mother thinks about her child, even when they are grown they are still our babies.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Donna, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from patmedium
Brooke, this is THE most beautiful, gentle praise to mother love. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
Of course, you know that children are only given to us on loan.
Pat.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Brooke, this is THE most beautiful, gentle praise to mother love. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
Of course, you know that children are only given to us on loan.
Pat.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Pat. I am so glad you could feel the love :-) Brooke
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Best wishes. Pat.
Comment from jayesnb
A beautifully written poem of a mothers love and adoration for her child... Very sweet and sentimental.. Spoken with much truth and honesty..A child truly knows he always has his mom on his side no matter what the difficulty...great job
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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A beautifully written poem of a mothers love and adoration for her child... Very sweet and sentimental.. Spoken with much truth and honesty..A child truly knows he always has his mom on his side no matter what the difficulty...great job
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Thank you, jayesnb. I truly do appreciate your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from words
Delightful!
I know the truth of this one:
I know he is not mine alone,
nor does he live for me to own,
but even now that he has grown,
he knows my heart remains his home.
Am having lunch with my own son tomorrow. He called to tell me February was booked, but the end of January looked good.
I am still laughing from that one.
A lovely write.
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Delightful!
I know the truth of this one:
I know he is not mine alone,
nor does he live for me to own,
but even now that he has grown,
he knows my heart remains his home.
Am having lunch with my own son tomorrow. He called to tell me February was booked, but the end of January looked good.
I am still laughing from that one.
A lovely write.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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February booked - yeah, their lives get amazingly busy once they are all grown up and have their own ten yard long list of responsibilities! Thanks so much for understanding this perfectly. I'm glad you can relate - make the most of your lunch :-) Brooke
