Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Oh, how lovely is this...
I do like a happy ending.
Do you know, you never cease
to amaze and surprise me with
all your clever different
themes -- you give us all so
much pleasure with your writings.

Thank you for making me smile, my friend.
Could you not find a soldier and a fairy then!
They look like two little gingermen in disguise,
kissing each other.
Margaret.

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2009

I couldn't find a decent matching picture to save my poetic life! LOL Thanks, Margaret :-) Brooke

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

i like this poem very much
i like the movement of the poem and the words were writen with so much lonleyness
yet it was recapture by the memories and love of his lady.


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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2009

Thank you, Misscookie - I appreciate your kindness :-) Brooke