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Karma Kite

Letting go

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Comment from Jmercer
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I like the imagery and the rhythm of this poem. It also works well with the naani format. The last line, in particular, feels very natural with only two words instead of feeling forced.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2009
    Thank you so much for reading and commenting in this kite.
Comment from DeepEyes
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Nice job. I really like this poem, I love the metaphores placed within. It sort of makes me feel a little less stressed when I read it. thanks.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2009
    I'm happy my words produced some release to your stress. I wish you the best. :)
Comment from mchapman
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I loved the imagery and the concept implied by the words. Great subject matter. Thanks for sharing...Mary Good Luck to you in the contest....

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2009
    Thank you for reading and reviewing this work.
Comment from irishauthorme
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A wonderful thought, and some great advice for the rest of us!
Kites have always been an inspiration for everyone, and who has not envied the easy flight and soaring freedom of a kite, flying in the wind?
Great imagery!
Irish

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2009
    Thank you Irish. In our beach every year there is a kite's contest. WOW, those colors are dazzling.
Comment from MsRefusenik
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A spiritual point of direction on how to live in a well-executed poem. Nicely done. Good writing. Excellent artwork which compliments the poem. Puts a smile on my face.

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2009
    Thank you for reviewing my work. Glad it made you smile:)