The Milk Moon
reflective quatrains95 total reviews
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Brooke, such a luscious and peaceful scene. Cows out to pasture and us raising our glasses for milk. All sounds so homely. I grew up on a ranch and can relate. We also harvested honey. I loved the rhyme and flow of your poem.
Oh, I did my first romance poem. When you have a moment please read and tell me what you think. No need to review - just pm me. I'll have to learn all the different styles. lol. luv jada
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Hi Brooke, such a luscious and peaceful scene. Cows out to pasture and us raising our glasses for milk. All sounds so homely. I grew up on a ranch and can relate. We also harvested honey. I loved the rhyme and flow of your poem.
Oh, I did my first romance poem. When you have a moment please read and tell me what you think. No need to review - just pm me. I'll have to learn all the different styles. lol. luv jada
Comment Written 04-May-2009
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Jada, I look forward to your first romance poem!! :-) Thanks for this gracious review, Brooke
Comment from stormwolf2
This poem says so much to me. A land of milk and honey where we will prosper. I also had reflections of my childhood when I used to visit my uncle's dairy ranch.
Nicely written with good rhyme and rhythm.
Best wishes,
Malcolm
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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This poem says so much to me. A land of milk and honey where we will prosper. I also had reflections of my childhood when I used to visit my uncle's dairy ranch.
Nicely written with good rhyme and rhythm.
Best wishes,
Malcolm
Comment Written 04-May-2009
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Malcolm, I'm glad this connected with childhood memories - thanks so much for your kind comments, Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
An interesting snippet of information...
this piece is so different to the last
I just read, and yet, still it is an excellent
piece, Brooke -- smooth flow to the words, and to
both rhythm and rhyme -- and complemented
by a great picture. You never cease to amaze
me with all the different themes you come up
with.
We've so many new calves here -- and young
lambs -- a lovely time of year -- I take a
few extra walks just to go and watch them
leap about in some game they play.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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An interesting snippet of information...
this piece is so different to the last
I just read, and yet, still it is an excellent
piece, Brooke -- smooth flow to the words, and to
both rhythm and rhyme -- and complemented
by a great picture. You never cease to amaze
me with all the different themes you come up
with.
We've so many new calves here -- and young
lambs -- a lovely time of year -- I take a
few extra walks just to go and watch them
leap about in some game they play.
Margaret.
Comment Written 04-May-2009
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Thank you, Margaret - I certainly try to keep from being in a writing rut. I love to explore different forms and topics. Brooke :-)
Comment from Rabianabian
Mmm... this made my mouth water! Milk and honey...somehow you presented those words in such a rich and wonderful way it sounded delicious. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Mmm... this made my mouth water! Milk and honey...somehow you presented those words in such a rich and wonderful way it sounded delicious. Excellent job.
Comment Written 04-May-2009
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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Mary, thank you - glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
Comment from joan marie
I wonder if I can see it that way in Florida. Sometimes different angles don't allow that sort of thing. Great writing. You and Margaret will be responsible for my Rose poem. I just got so into wanting the colors you guys see. joan marie
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reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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I wonder if I can see it that way in Florida. Sometimes different angles don't allow that sort of thing. Great writing. You and Margaret will be responsible for my Rose poem. I just got so into wanting the colors you guys see. joan marie
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Comment Written 04-May-2009
reply by the author on 04-May-2009
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You've confused me - see it what way? :-)
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Sometimes you can't see things happening in the sky because of clouds or the angle of the earth is what I meant. jm
